 Azera-v 2008-03-12 . chapter 3Im hoping that you havnt given up on this story yet! Please update! |
 smiling cat 2007-07-13 . chapter 3I enjoied this siries much, hope Zuko will find the courage soon.
I don't understand something, did he free his uncle? |
 Veglma 2007-04-24 . chapter 3Wish Zuko luck in not getting taken over by the Blue Spirit personality. :D
*glee* They are going to meet in the next chapter! ...I think. |
 showeringtiger7 2007-04-24 . chapter 1Whipee! |
 Dragon Jadefire 2007-04-24 . chapter 3Actually, I think its made of metal, and I don't think it was down in the water that long, so it most likely wouldn't have rusted. |
 Veglma 2007-04-24 . chapter 2Very interesting.
I can't wait for their meeting. :D |
 Dragon Jadefire 2007-04-23 . chapter 2This chapter would have been wonderful for a dream scene.
Zuko: Is flashbacks and dreams you answer to every problem when you don't have much to write?
Me: YUP! Though, I personally, think they would put the Earth King on Kyoshi Island. |
 Dragon Jadefire 2007-04-23 . chapter 1I believe strongly that The Blue Spirit is going to make a comeback in Book Fire.
Zuko: What? I'm going to go diving for it in Lake Laogai?
Me: EXACTLY!
Zuko: Sure, when pigs fly.
Me: I think this chapter should be titled "Silent as Death", you know something more dramatic.
Zuko: Anything else?
Me: Ooh! Yeah, and if you don't have a scene playing in your head already about when Katara takes Zuko's mask off, just a suggestion, but do it in the woods, in the rain and he should be backed up into a corner, and it should be after a battle.
Zuko: She's going to put it on alert and in her C2. |