O...May 16th is my b-day. ^^
This fic is really interesting...
Hehe...I'm a sucker for good high school fics.
I like the beginning. Especially Naruto and Sasuke's first encounter w/ each other. It was really amusing.
Hope you update soon!

I like these kind of fics, the ones set in school. Speaking of which, I know how school can get in the way. I'm still figuring out how I can work around that whilst getting my own stuff updated. It's tricky!

But anyways, I like where this is going! I hope you update as soon as you muse and time permits. Good luck!

Can you continue this? Please? It's interesting!

I like this begining, please continue soon.

Love,
Scape-chan.

Ooh, I like it, I like it, I like it! No one has done a truly good soccer story yet. Okay, so no one has done a good soccer story that focuses on Sasuke and Naruto. So I'm obsessed. Who isn't on this site?

I like how you described them as a family. You even added in a little mystery with the *ahem* mysterious incident from the year before.

Please continue to update. I'll give you all the criticism and praise you can handle! Uh, as long as I don't get distracted and forget to check for updates. Obsessed and short-attention span too! It's an interesting combination, I can assure you.

I really would appreciate it though. Happy Writing.

update ^^

Interesting story so far. I like the idea and the plot. I wonder who this "betrayer" is. At first I thought it would be Sasuke like most stories, but I was surprised to say the least. My only pointer would try not italicize so many words. I know you're trying to emphasize some words and all, but it's really unnecessary. The reader can figure out which words to emphasize. Anyways, hope you update soon!

-Kristine X3-

Grate chapter! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Good for a starting chapter, but you could have ended later o well still keep it up.

hey... nice start. :)

I would love to read more. :D Loved Sasuke's dramatic entrance. Heehee.

update soon

Gakuran are smexy, m. *imagines Sasuke and Naruto doing it in the boy's bathroom* X3 Woot for soccer teams! Hope we see more from you hime-chan!

Dont make Sasuke a loner! Please! I just cant take it if he has no friends...

I do like this story, I wanna see where it goes. Update soon Please! ^_^!

Very interesting start! But I'm not usually into NaruSasu, it just icks me out for some reason, but a very good first chapter anyways!

i love it!
plz update soon!