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The Little Corinthian
2007-04-29
ch 1,
abuseAw, I like it :0P Nice job!
LocoGreggo
2007-04-28
ch 1,
abuseWonderful job. :) Very enjoyable.
Crema De Estrellas
2007-04-28
ch 1,
abuseThis was beautiful. I'd feel bad for Sofia, but she's so much better/prettier than me. AND she has Nick. No fair.
jaed621
2007-04-28
ch 1,
abuseYeah, ugly ducklings unite because we all know she turned out to be a beautiful swan even if she didn't know it herself. Great story, I just can't tell you enough how much i love these two together. I SO look forward to more from you about them because I think you really bring them to life and give them depth, not to mention the sex...that's excellent too. So please keep writing, well done.
Jaed xo
notesofwimsey
2007-04-26
ch 1,
abuseI.HATE.NO.ALERTS!

Loved this story, though. You did a great job of giving Sofia some context with her family background, and really, could Nick be any sweeter and not simply melt in the rain?
geek'd
2007-04-24
ch 1,
abusehow sweet! and true. very true. everyone has insecureties, some more than others.
drabble is fun to read most of the time, and this is perfect!
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