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| The Little Corinthian 2007-04-29 ch 1, | abuseAw, I like it :0P Nice job! |
| LocoGreggo 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuseWonderful job. :) Very enjoyable. |
| Crema De Estrellas 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuseThis was beautiful. I'd feel bad for Sofia, but she's so much better/prettier than me. AND she has Nick. No fair. |
| jaed621 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuseYeah, ugly ducklings unite because we all know she turned out to be a beautiful swan even if she didn't know it herself. Great story, I just can't tell you enough how much i love these two together. I SO look forward to more from you about them because I think you really bring them to life and give them depth, not to mention the sex...that's excellent too. So please keep writing, well done. Jaed xo |
| notesofwimsey 2007-04-26 ch 1, | abuseI.HATE.NO.ALERTS! Loved this story, though. You did a great job of giving Sofia some context with her family background, and really, could Nick be any sweeter and not simply melt in the rain? |
| geek'd 2007-04-24 ch 1, | abusehow sweet! and true. very true. everyone has insecureties, some more than others. drabble is fun to read most of the time, and this is perfect! |