 Anym. 2009-08-15 . chapter 5Awesome I hope you update soon! |
 Jasper's Lil Red 2009-08-15 . chapter 5Oh! Poor Beast Boy! AHH! THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER! Ever Ever in the world! |
 Jasper's Lil Red 2009-08-15 . chapter 4O_O! Must... read... chapter... AAH! |
 Jasper's Lil Red 2009-08-15 . chapter 3AW! This is super good! You write so well and the story is AMAZING! |
 Jasper's Lil Red 2009-08-15 . chapter 2This is super good! Like, book good! No, like, Best Seller good! |
 Waterdog 2009-05-04 . chapter 5I beg you for the next chapter! I must know what happens next! ... I wonder why everyone excepts the same past for Beast Boy... why is that? |
 FlameToungue 2009-05-04 . chapter 5OMG THIS IS AMAZING PLEASE WRITE MORE ASAP! |
 pappflora 2009-01-03 . chapter 5Na,it's getting more and more interesting!
Please,when will you continue this story? |
 mdizzle 2008-10-12 . chapter 5YEah Starfire might have a better concept of where B is coming from. But...you have yet to say how Raven feels about all of this. |
 darkgraywolf 2008-10-12 . chapter 5Wow i really love this story, and i love the twist with beast boy becoming chief of the tribe, please update i love this wonderful story. and is this have any bb/rae in it? just wondering if so i do not ming :) very good story i cant wait for the next chapter |
 acosta perez jose ramiro 2008-10-11 . chapter 5Very good chapter, and nice job with the villagers and their traditions.
If replying please do it via e-mail. Thanks.
Keep the good writing. |
 The Flying Frog 2008-10-11 . chapter 5I can see Beast Boy reacting like that. Doesn't stop him from placing Zareb as a steward or something for when he returns to Jump City. Oh well. Hope Starfire can cheer him up. |
 Mortal Guardian 2008-10-11 . chapter 5That Beast Boy has been selected as the chief of the village, of this I'm sure since he was adopted by Tawaba, has it as much to do with his past and his connection to the jewel (unless it is he who is the jewel)?
By the way, will you have another chapter posted soon? |
 Alika Jones 2008-09-28 . chapter 4 Oh, clif hanger. How evil of you. Well you had better finish this story because it is really good. I am hooked and I want to know what happens. You have a good writing style and you pay attention to things like spelling and grammer. This adds to the story and makes it easier to read. Please update soon, it would be such a shame to never finish such a good story. |
 bbissocute 2008-04-02 . chapter 4-GASP- Oh no! This situation could turn very badly...Excellent job, as always. I'm on the edge of my seat. I can't wait to read what happens next! Keep up the great work. ^.^
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Ps. So sorry for the late review. My email is randomly eating my mail... |