I think your story is really beautiful (isn't that weird ? But well...). Your writing is so easy to read ! And I'm so in love with the Takuma/Shuya pairing since I saw BRII, I was just hoping that someone had written about them... Thank you !^^

Just a little different, yes. And no dear, the ending was fine. Seriously, don't worry about it- this whole thing was right up my street. You've pulled off an... odd pairing very well, and managed to do so amidst the even greater oddness that abounded in BR:II. Really well done.

A pairing I've never thought of. I've always wondered what happened to the two groups after they left at the end. Did they stay together or spilit up? How did the two of them escape from the island?

haha, ^^
yours is the first(an only so far) tatsuya an shugo story i could find!! (well.. them in character anyway..)
anyway, great story
x

I responded on LiveJournal a while back, but it deserves to be said again that the characterization is absolutely beautiful in this. Completely amazing.

It's beautiful.

Gorgeous. You have an excellent control of wording and descriptions that just make everything seem very human, real, and generally beautiful. :) The humanizing effort is greatly appreciated and it definitely makes Shuya even more loveable!