 Ravenclaw Samurai 2008-03-04 . chapter 1This is really cute! Bender and Allison are awesome! Keep writing! [; |
 romantic.dreamer26 2007-12-31 . chapter 1Oh, it's so cute! I can totally picture his grin and I can actually see that kind of thing happen! I always thought they'd make a good couple in the movie, like when Andy decides to go the other way and Bender doesn't move until Allison starts stamping her feet. I always thought that was really cute. I'm glad you've done this pairing. I just wish it wasn't a oneshot! Maybe you'll do another? To quote your fabulous story, "Please?" Seriously though, I like how you write! Much love! XOXO |
 cucu4cocopuffs 2007-10-28 . chapter 1Perfection. I adored the Allison/Bender moments. |
 Raven-Rain 2007-10-04 . chapter 1aw, that was really sweet. I haven't read many Breakfast Club fanfic but I mostly like the idea of Bender and Claire so that was a nice surprise :)
Allison and Bender actually make a good pairing.
So will you continue with this or not? |
 Mark of CTown 2007-09-13 . chapter 1Aww! So cute and very well written! I always thought they'd make a cute couple! |
 lvswtht 2007-07-16 . chapter 1Wow! I luv it. You did a great job and I'm sure that if you had decided to make it several chapters it would have been equally great, if not more. |
 Jemascola 2007-05-28 . chapter 1I liked that fic. The story was very good. |
 MidnightBlue88 2007-05-09 . chapter 1Hey, I'm finally here, reviewing! What do you know. But as I will explain in the email I'm going to send in about...oh, half an hour...my computer crashed and left me with no internet connection for almost 3 weeks, except for a few minutes here and there at work. So, that's my excuse and I'm sticking to it.
Anyway, onto the review. You and I both know that I'm not a huge fan of BenderAllison, and you know my reasons. But all that aside, I quite enjoyed this one-shot. The dialogue was snappy and in character, as usual. I especially liked all of the references to Allison being a pessimist/romantic, as well as Allison's response to him being an **, LOL. Well, it's true, isn't it? I also loved the end, where they both say that the other is easier to read than they think.
And the Coke can. Well, of course I loved that. I swear I'll return the favor someday. :) Oh, and I liked Chris's reaction to her catching it, LOL. Freaky, man.
Anyway, nice job. Do something longer next time, eh? Maybe a series? I'd even go for BenderAllison if that's what you were in the mood to write. At any rate, I'm glad you're back.
-K |
 alBBie 2007-05-01 . chapter 1Wait... you didn't use the line you were supposed to use. Good anyway, though. Happy and lighthearted. I liked it. |
 eggydude 2007-04-28 . chapter 1My dearest
Elena
Twas alright,
not the best but beter than you seemed to think it was
baha
the lower your expectaions the shorter the fall
Or something like that
Twas pretty good, you got there realtionship pretty well
AND
the coke throwing! the coke throwing!
Best ever
xx
- E |
 iShallFade 2007-04-26 . chapter 1O, cute chappie! I think you portrayed their character perfectly. |
 TWbasketcase 2007-04-23 . chapter 1Haha, this was fun! I liked how you kept everything so casual and sarcastic...that's exactly how I picture them to be! I mean, even though Allison analyzes everything and John can be a bit of an **, they are both just the type to go with the flow...even if they know the consequences would be bad or good. I really liked that.
I also really liked the on going pessimism theme. That isn't something that I've really delved into before with them, but I really think that it suits. Good job with that.
Anyhow, I thought they were pretty well in character. You had some really good dialogue in there as well, and you did a good job of keeping the mood comfortable and not over the top. Awesome work, I really enjoyed this!
Kristen |
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