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| Sawyer Fan 2008-06-12 ch 29,  | abuseWow...just Wow! This is one of the best fanfictions I've read...period. The writing was top notch, the details incredible, the characterizations spot on, and the Greg angst was a plenty! I'm very glad you did decide to finish it, even though the TV series went in a different direction. I prefer your 'version' myself. I read this all in one sitting last night, but it got so late I had to wait until today to post a review. Thanks for an incredible read! |
| happyharper13 2008-06-12 ch 29, | abuseWOW! Amazing story all around, and I like how you didn't draw out the ending or make it cliched or too similar to other stories. Awesome job. |
| goldenspringtime 2008-06-11 ch 29, | abuseAwesome story I liked it so much I read it all in one day and I don't do that very often. Good job! |
| LOCISVU 2008-06-11 ch 29, | abuseWow.I can't believe that Ecklie managed to save Greg. |
| Mandi96 2008-06-11 ch 29, | abuseAw, I'm sorry to see that it's all over. :( But it was a good finale. Are you going ot be writing anything similar? |
| Gintsu 2008-04-15 ch 28, anon. | abuseWhat's this? No update?! you really should! I wan't to know what happens to Greg! This story is so good! Pleease, update! |
| Dark Twinkling Star 2008-02-19 ch 28, | abuseThis is awesome, I think it would have been better then, when Sara got trapped under the car.:D |
| Evil Genius of the COCA 2008-01-27 ch 28, | abuseI expected something like this, and yet it still shocked me. And, the worst part is that I CAN'T actually go on to see what their next move will be...PLEASE update soon, for the sake of Greg, the team, and my sanity. X) Love and Peace ~EG~ |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-01-21 ch 28, | abuseim confused, is this being treposted, or what? loving it though, nice to re read things, well to and extent... i must just be too tired, thats it |
| GreggoAddict 2008-01-19 ch 28, | abuseoh no! updateupdateupdate! |
| hyperthermophile 2008-01-18 ch 28, | abuseNot Greg. Please, not Greg!! You can't let him die! I have to say, this is one of the most intense stories I've ever discovered here on Not many stories can capture my interest like this one has done. It's so suspenseful! I was literally holding my breath during the last few chapters. This has to be one of my favourite works of fiction so far. You have minimal grammatical and spelling errors, and your characterization is mostly on par. My only comment would be that in CSI it doesn't seem like Greg and Warrck talk much, and when they do it's usually very brief (Warrick also usually calls Greg "Sanders") But that's an incredibly small detail, and besides, having your teammate in a life-death situation would probably make you appreciate them a little bit more. My only critique is that you haven't posted the next chapter yet. ^__^ Don't leave us humble readers in the dark! wL-->hyper-san |
| Radical Pretense Gothica 2008-01-17 ch 28, | abuseUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE! |
| Zaik of Wake 2008-01-17 ch 28, | abuseOh dear lord if you don't update I'll sick Chewie on your sorry ass! |
| LOCISVU 2008-01-15 ch 28, | abusePlease let Greg be alive!! |
| LOCISVU 2008-01-15 ch 27, | abuseArgh no! |