i loved every word...

the piece is very powerful. there wasn't much explaination but you understand right away. i think that having short stories such as these will stimulate a reader's mind. make them think what was happening even though the it is not explained. there really was no need to elaborate your story.

i was like, "wow"...

This story made my eyes water. So sad. I love it.

Sarah: oh how dare you leave it at that! sheesh, almost as bad as Blackmail! you love leaving cliffies, doncha?

A beautiful and powerful piece...I think it's brevity lends itself to the overall compact. Wonderfully written, the emotions are captured so well.

Gah! Damn you! Now I'm all...SAD...Keep writing!
Toodles,
bobalina

wow dat was deep
DAT WAS HECKA GOOD lol

what hes not coming back! oh no thats so sad! i hate character deaths wa

OH! This is just so sad...but good anyways. I particularly liked the part where she flung a kitchen knife at Neji.

ooh bittersweet. Are you planning to write another chapter fic at some stage? Don't think I'ver seen a Naruto one since 'Between'

Hey what's up that was an awesome chapter and I really hope that you update soon cause i really want to know what happens next.
Love,
=^.^= Sango17

It is amazing how you can set up the characters and stories in such a short chapter and make the reader feel attached. Excellent start!

I was just thinking last night that I wanted to read some NejiSaku, and now here it is! Fancy that! Its good to see you updating again, I haven't seen your name in my inbox in a while. This story was so wonderfully sad, the last two lines broke my heart. Sakura is going to live a very hard life if she loses them both to each other!

so shweet! please update! or give a sequal!

“I think I broke it.”

Is it so bad that I find this humorous?

Angsty, yes, the knife in the wall, just a tad bit scary, but fitting.

~poco

Bah! That was little sadder than I expected it to be, but very well written none the less.
Good job!
Alaina-san