That was Good! Thanks

you should continue this =]
it's getting really good && i love lizwin =]

Ohh! Just kidding. But it was a very well written story. I've not read the first one, but I'll get to it. I'm trying to read all of the Lizwins on this site!

loved it update soon

Will there be another sequel? :O

Please say that if you write another chapter or another Lizwin fan fiction that it won't be as visual as this one is. But don't stop writing for this fan fiction.

ooh! Very nice!! Very nicely discriptive!

this was my first time reading a lizwin and it was really good!

Aww it funny maybe you could make the next one be a homerun :)

That was Great! I was laughing so hard. Great stories, love it.

Haha this was just
down right hilarious!

OMG! Hahahahaha! I love this story so much. Good job!

Hope to be reading more of your work soon.

wow
hot
lol i liked a study in a desire and was excited by a sequel,
good job!

LOL ha!