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Coffee Toffee Twisted Froste
2009-09-20 . chapter 4
Wow... and you know, I could imagine that, too... But mostly, Fred and George just hated the school teachers, right? They had their priorities straight... then again, a babysitter would be just like a schoolteacher-- someone to keep them in line! All in all, though, a good story! Thanks for sharing!
Squeaky
-Rosemary-Lilly-Allium-
2009-04-13 . chapter 1
Think you've got the characters a bit wrong here - They're only four!?
The twins in this talk like you've taken the teenagers straight out of the books.

~Rose x
Navig8R
2008-06-14 . chapter 2
Hilarious.

You got the baby-slime-coating-every-surface thing just right.
Navig8R
2008-06-14 . chapter 1
Good start. Nice setup.

But the title: "Prolouge"?
Is that some sort of non-amateur winter sport involving sliding supine down an icy chute at terrifying speeds?

Why not "Prologue" ~_^
Most dedicated reveiwer
2007-07-29 . chapter 1
WOO-HOO!More random comments from everyone's favourite reveiwer! SO happy that the datatrak got a mention on your profile!What a releif they're actually working for us, eh Eruthiel? Like your sig, by the way. So long, freaky one with the brand-new notebook.
anti-fanfiction
2007-07-09 . chapter 1
Sigh...*reaches for whiskey bottle and gluggs a bit down. Watches one of those balls of stuff that you get way out west in a depressing scene. Listens to the moaning wind* Sorry. No reflection on your fic. It was good, really. I'm just so bored at the moment. Though why I'm HERE to relieve my boredom is beyond me. Perhaps I'm going insane due to boredom...whaddaya think? Well...so long again.I'll be back.One day. Talking. In very short setences. spelin evvythin rong.writ smfin els so I cn giv mor pointless reveiws that are not hepful at all. Bet you're sick of me by now, eh, eruthiel?Bye...for now.
anti-fanfiction
2007-07-08 . chapter 1
Sheesh, you don't get very interesting reveiws, do you? COME ON PEOPLE give the girl a little humor here, or else her sense of the stuff might just conk out all together! Trust me, she's on the brink of a total humor breakdown. She's starting to laugh at the strangest things...oh, and where's Freakonomics? You've been promising me that for, like, YEARS! So long, eruthiel
I will not say this again
2007-06-27 . chapter 1
FREAKONOMICSFREAKONOMICSFREAKONOMICSFREAKONOMICSFREAKONOMICSFREAKONOMICSFREAKONOMICSFREAKONOMICSFREAKONOMICSFREAKONOMICSFREAKONOMICSFREAKONOMICSFREAKONOMICSFREAKONOMICSFREAKONOMICSFREAKONOMICS!
Sorry, nothing to do with the story, but i will not say this again(see above). When do you intend to give me that book back? It is mine by birthdayright, you fool. Return it, or else I shall send the DATATRAK to retrive it! Fly, my pretties, Fly! Mwahahahahahahahah!
Heehee... I like that. I like that a lot. Yeah, like all those other fanfiction ...people ... I think it is very cute with a lot of scope for humor. Bya!
Mariano's-twins
2007-04-30 . chapter 4
cute story. I like it a lot.
l8er
.:Nikos:.
Trickster Girl
2007-04-28 . chapter 3
Funny, wonder what mommy will say or do.
Thankyou thankyou thankyou, the plots good
Pallas Athen
2007-04-27 . chapter 3
GASP!
Trickster Girl
2007-04-25 . chapter 2
The begining sounds good but make it really funny, plesse. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
Jarlaxle Baenre
2007-04-24 . chapter 1
Cute :-D

Yeah, the ages are a bit off--Tonks is only about eight years older than the twins because she's the same age as Charlie, but it's cute anyway. Good luck.
oneandonlysusan
2007-04-24 . chapter 1
keep going! it sounds really funny!
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