OMG! dude, I frikkin loved this! I always preferred the pairing of Elizabeth and Will( Orlando Bloom is HOT!) but this changed my perspective on that, and not much can do that. Good frikkin job!

great story_

"I had a religious experiance"

PAHAHA. that's GREAT. and so was the whole story.

Aw! Great. great job. It is really GOOD.

I loved it.

I think you should go on...the story is much too damn good to leave it!

great storie

loved the way you wrote it

Cheers

AJ

I think that was the most amazing fanfic I've ever read. Truly amazing job. Fantastic. Incredible. Bravo.

"Lizzie, my pirate, my murderess, the one who sent me to hell with a kiss and a promise that this wasn't over." My favorite line. This was really good. You had my attention from the very first line to end. I love how this wasn't just about lust, how you added in that line about Jack falling as a child and his father teasing him that he'd lost his brains in the fall. I really loved that this was in Jack's POV, most of all. I haven't read anything yet that was in his POV. You wrote this well.

-Rory4

I'm so glad you recommended that I read this one, DP! This piece was very nicely done and I like the way you ended things. There was just enough real depth and emotion included between the two of them while keeping Jack's thoughts and actions true to character. I like that you ended this with Lizzie leaving, but she leaves with the promise that they'll meet again. Great job, dearie!

I'm crying! I'm not joking...I'm actually sobbing! I'm an emotional kinda girl...but you're writing was so good. My heart was beating as I read that whole thing and then the ending just got me. From the moment he noticed his had was gone I had a lump in my throat but after he answered "yes" to the last question I was crying like a baby. Ok! you may think I'm crazy now but...that was so beatiful...so sad...so right.

Oh, my god! Loved this! This MUST go on my favorites! GREAT JOB!

SF

That's the best one so far, Jack and 'lizzie' pairings. you did it better than all the rest, i'm glad i've fianlly found you, worthy JE writer. WHOHO! you get 2 gold stars and a naughty wink;)

that was beautifully written

Very cute! I loved it...

Amazing discriptions and amazing writing. I like how you used Jack's voice throughout the story.

Brillant.

damn it! why can't her name be emily? god that wad great all i could do to get through it was use my name instead of hers! haha jack and will are both sexy hehe i love them so much! great job keep it up!

*-* very good!