Wow! I go running to look for the continuation.

Lots of comments here:

1) I loved seeing the Seekers work together!
2) I was actually cheering for Megatron, and applauding Soundwave's loyalty. Nice touch with Soundwave's 'true' voice, and how only Megatron was allowed to hear it.

gonna keep reading now.

Ok, I -HAD- to review immediately. I have just this to say: WOW! I'm so hooked! The instant I realized what those guys had uncovered, I was like OMG. Then when Prime told Jazz that story it changed to Awsome! And I like the Twins being Vipers. Very fitting, especially Sideswipe's convertable roof. All presented personalities were spot on. And the ending... it's not easy being leader, is it, Prime? And the -true- name for this second Matrix had my heart in my throat. -Decepticon- Matrix of Power? Oh Frag! This is gonna get real good real fast.

Hmm . . . curiouser and curiouser. I loved the appearance of Artemis Prime. As for the rest, there were so many fascinating developments and cliff hangers that the only thing left for me to do is keep reading. This is excellent!

Wow! The description of the Matrix and the effect it was having on Jazz was amazing. The sensation of sound and 'music' seemed like something I've felt, so he gets all my sympathies. Very cool when his eyes were green, too! I was glad when Prime rallied the troops to go find Jazz and the twins - it's going to be interesting to see the Matrixes together. If they're talking now, what'll they do when they're side by side?

At least Megatron is turning his setback into opportunity - or at least he's trying. I like Snaptrap and his so-nonsense approach to Megatron. It's very intriguing to have two rival groups of bad guys vying for the same goal and each other.

And it looks as if life is about to get really interesting for our heroes . . .

I think the thing I'm enjoying most about this story is the relationships and dynamics among the various groups the story is following. There is friendship (of a kind, at least), brotherhood, loyalty, and an underlying network of emotions running through both the Autobots and the Decepticons. It makes reading this that much more intriguing, because while plans and schemes may lead the characters one way, their emotions may lead them another.

I enjoyed the description at the opening of this chapter - you have a marvelous way of setting moods and scenes, as well as estalishing characterization. Megatron is ruthless, but you amplify and reflect it in the Decepticons' reactions to him. The fight with Devastator and the Combaticons was great - clear, intense, and action-packed! I knew Starscream had to be behind it all.

And oh! The twins were thoroughly in character and a pleasure to read. Their argument was typical of siblings, as was their reconciliation! I appreciate how you take the time to make each Transformer a recognizale, individualized character with distinct personalitites and traits. Wonderful writing!

Artemis Prime? I've HEARD that before... (shrugs) Me likes shiney mechs from the future! Whoohoo! (goes to click the next chappy button... Only to find there is none) ... (jumps jumps up) Onto the next part! Can't believe you gave 'Screamer the Matrix of Power and just ended it. :) You're very good with this! ^0^ Great work!

Snaptrap sounds nasty... (shudders) I bet Slipstream could take 'im though. And a couple million dust bunnies. ^_- You're very evil by leaving that cliffy! Grr... :3 (hugs and hands out a cookie) Very nice writing once again. And I like the quote at the begining of this chapter too.

Whoohoo! Operation: Rescue Megs... From his own base... :3 This mental picture is amusing. I knew Sound wouldn't betray him. Although I feel a bit bad for Megatron being all alone now. (beams stupidly) Someone needs a hug! (runs off to hug the old goat)

Nothing big to report grammar wise! Not like there ever is anyways. ^_-

I love your writing style. Seriously. :) The fighting scene with Megs getting betrayed by the 'Cons was teh best. He should've seen it coming to him. Starscream's such a- (cuts herself off) ... (grins stupidly) ...Cookie? I wanna cookie... (waves her hand around as if saying 'oh! oh! pick me!') As for grammar, all was good. I think there was one tiny litle hiccup, but that's all I saw.

Hey, I told you I'd read and review! ^0^ (whistles) You're an amazing writer. I hope you now that! Brillantly put together in my opnion. And I like King Kong... WHOOP! ;) Very nice first chapter. You got me hooked... Now... ONTO THE NEXT CHAPPY!

Oh, lordy, the twins are a hoot! King Kong! I love it. Jazz is going to have his hands full!

A very intriguing start! I'll have to force myself to read slowly and make it last!

I've been thinking how to do it, but-Sunny. *sobs* I can't get past that part *goes to Sideswipe and sobs all over him*

whoa that was so cool! I love the first little conversation between Sunny and Sides. You did an awesome in my opinion describing the whole temporal distortion things. You defently got the suspension down when Sideswipe watched his brother 'die', that was so sad. And the end *growls* makes me hate Sceamer more, but you got the whole evil phyco bad guy down.