Cool. It really shows how Van felt about his conflict with Allen for Hitomi.

That was really sweet and I love how Hitomi used that opportunity for revenge!

Hitomi's thoughts are adorable especially her blushing!

He could see the millions of shooting stars reflected in her luminous emerald eyes.

That line is absolutely beautiful!

again so well done

tee hee, so Van is a lil bit Moony :P
I was flicking through my e-mail and realized I hadn't read this one yet ^_^

aw... very good keep it up bye now...

The last words are so beautiful. We are looking forward to read more.

Aw, poor Van, the woes of love

So lovely...

aw

like it whole big bunches... bye now...

long time no see!

It's about time girl!
I liked this chapter. It's really cute.

I remeber what some sunrises look like, I didn't stay long enough to watch them as I was heading to bed... but I've seen a few :P
Anywho, Van it always is and always will be your fault, just accept that fact now and yours and Hitomi's relationship will be much better for it ^_^