This story took me by surprise. It flows forward at a great pace, and the back-and-forthing between the two realities does not jar. I enjoyed the details and differences between the characters from the different realities, and the details of what made them different. Very well done.

oh! sad ending. poor here-harry. but oh, what a brilliant story. :)

I loved this story, It was great from the start till the end.
Do you plan to write on a sequel? or maybe another Harry Potter story?

AH!
it's just... just!
AH!


*breathes*
I really loved and enjoyed this. Great work.

Damn! Did it *need* to have a bad ending? Surely the other Severus would have been much better with canon Harry. And the other way round.

Wonderful story and portrayal of the characters. And of course I wish there was more.

This was, perhaps, one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. It effectively prodded my heart, tore it out, then stomped all over it, in the best way possible.

Thank you for this.

I enjoyed this fanfic very much. I got the impression that 'here' Snape fell for 'not here' Harry. It's the wishing for a devoted lover, I tells you! *anguished cry*

The ending was so bittersweet. But my favourite was the sixteenth chapter, especially 'here'. :D

Thank you for telling me where to find the completed story. I enjoyed it very much.

Somewhere in the back of my mind I know I need to hyperventilate. There is this urgent slighly destructive need to cry like a little girl, as well. Amidst all of this, I find embedded that mysterious empty feeling that one gets when an incredible story comes to an end.

You, my dear friend, deserve a shrine, with its very own cult following and life-long fangirls willing to lay their souls at your feet.

I, for one, sat in my usually comfy cushioned wheely chair and read your story in one go. Let me tell you my butt didn't appreciate it, but the fact that I had a knot in my throat and felt like no other fanfic would ever quell my mysery and/or eternal adoration was more than enough to make the numbness irrelevant.

Thank you for this.

Like. Whoa.

T.T

that was amazing!i love the ending and the story was a bit bittersweet from Harry's point of view

I'm late in leaving this review, but wanted to say how much I've loved this story. My heart ached for Harry who fell in love with Severus and then had to leave him. And I'm wondering, did Severus also fall in love with our Harry? Will he be happy with his own Harry? Will Neville ever defeat Voldemort? Did Snape feel anything for the weaker Harry or envy his other identity? I admit romantic me wanted something to develope between our Harry and Snape, but didn't really expect it, but Snape did take the memories so I will hold out hope for the future.

u best be writing a sequel. I want our Harry to get together with Sev! please xD

An excellent fic.

Loved it...the ending is horribly appropriate. I felt so bad for our Harry though. Alas, I sort of knew nothing else could occur. Awesome-sauce - this fic is truly original and inspiring. I loved every second of it!

Cheers,
Karaii