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midorii813
2008-06-22 . chapter 1
Lo~vely description of Sanzo's hands. Weapons of destruction, yet gentle when needed. Love it.
EmpyrealFantasy
2007-05-21 . chapter 1
Oh Leslie-love...the ending. *wibble!* MAN, youre too good at making me wanna cry! *weep* You need to come home from work and cheer me up now...or call me. ;_; *sniff!*
Madhumalati
2007-04-30 . chapter 1
Very pretty indeed!
My favourite line would be, without question, "They carry the scars and marks that weave a tale of tragedy and pain, claiming to hold nothing even as they clutch tightly to what they hold dear." A clear and accurate parallel to Sanzo himself - I've noticed how possessive he is about the gun and the sutra, and his hands are an expression of that. The tone is just perfect for the setting - contemplative and peaceful in a melancholic sort of way, the afterglow clear in the way Goku's thoughts run.
Nice work. Keep it up.
promenade
2007-04-26 . chapter 1
ah. :)
another beautifully writen fic.
your description was probably at its peak perfection.
I like the 'tender, yet deadly' contrast...and of course when you expressed how great a picture it would be when their comparative shades are put together... I really need to get more descriptive T_T.

You've always been an inspiration to me,
EoS.

Keep up the good work.
^_~
TheToastAlchemist
2007-04-25 . chapter 1
“Marble-white meets sun-polished bronze to create a beautiful contradiction, much like the lovers themselves.”

Wow. Just, wow. I thought this was beautifully written, and I’m particularly fond of the youthful adoration you allowed Goku to feel towards Sanzo’s hands. This made me very happy. =3

-Toasty.
ijpyu
2007-04-24 . chapter 1
Aw! I love Xpyne's art- the hands she drew are fantastic~!
Ro Anshi
2007-04-24 . chapter 1
That is just absolutely yummy, made even more so by the fact that I'm familiar with the fan art in question. You've painted a really lovely word-picture more than worthy of the art that inspired it.
Warrior Nun
2007-04-24 . chapter 1
Aw...that is so sweet and cute! I heart it!
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