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Reviews For: Christmas on the Field

Yemam2422
2007-04-24
ch 1,
abuseI love the note Lindsay left for Danny! It's a perfect description of their relationship - that they feel like they've known each other forever and are comfortable but at the same time feel so unsure about a lot of other things between them.

I like Danny's initial disapointment at Lindsay's gift and that he wished for/expected more. Reading a christmas fic in April was actually quite refreshing. Good story!
chili-peppers
2007-04-24
ch 1,
abuseOh wow! That was awesome! Great Job! :D
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