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Reviews For: The First Surrender
Sushi Chi 2008-09-02 . chapter 1
That was amazing. I am amazed that I feel so sad that he got his hair cut. I'd say thats some wonderful word choice to make me feel like crappy about him getting a hair cut. Amazing.
cirana 2008-01-14 . chapter 1
gd fic
Twinchy 2007-11-22 . chapter 1
*sobs* No!
What a sad, short, little fic. *whimpers*
girlfan1979 2007-06-09 . chapter 1
Beautiful story. Small and sad and perfect.
Silverlycan 2007-06-02 . chapter 1
I actually feel bad for Dean's hair. Of course it's the symbolism that's really affecting me, but nonetheless. You have made me feel bad for hair, jolly good! Quite a feat.

Thank you for posting!

Cheers.
Sierra Nichole 2007-05-27 . chapter 1
Wonderful story, so heartbreaking. I remember when my 2-year-old brother got his hair cut for the first time, he cried and cried...and it wasn't nearly as traumatic as poor Dean's experience :(

And I'd like to add...there is no error, in the pilot episode Dean clearly has long, dark blonde hair. In a photo shown later, when Dean is about 10, he has dark brown hair and Sammy has blonde. But still, in the beginning Dean was a blondie :)
iluvsprntrl 2007-04-25 . chapter 1
that was really good. it was really touching.
Poaetpainter 2007-04-24 . chapter 1
Woah. That was really sad for such a simple thing. Good job.
WofOZ 2007-04-24 . chapter 1
God that's SO sad... I'm close to tears! Poor Dean! Good story, very effective!
DontKnowMyName 2007-04-24 . chapter 1
Wow... at first I was a little confused but I think
I REALLY like it! I like how you took something so
simple as a hair cut and made it mean so much more
Great job!
Darktales 2007-04-24 . chapter 1
Very sad - well done but one continuity error. Dean has brown hair. If you watch the pilot, you'll see little Dean has dark brown hair. In a later photo of Sam and Dean it is baby Sam who has the blond hair but for some reason people like to overlook that and write Dean with blond hair. Even now he has light brown.

Other than that, very cute. But like I said sad.
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