This is the BIGGEST chapter that I've ever seen.

hiya you would probably get more reviews if this story was split up into more chapters. i would give a more detailed review if i finished reading what was here. that might take a while though. is it a little game that your characters discription from us and slowly let us put them together. took forever to find out that your main dude was a blue eyes blond due with a beard and mustache(spelling)