aand here I am ! are you surprised ? ^^
Just reviewing to tell you I'm adding this in my favorites here as well (wanna make sure not to lose this jewel :D), and mentioning something I forgot on lj, the only thing that bugged me as I read : the capitalized "You"s. It just threw me off everytime I saw a capital whithout any reason, made me think it was a new sentence when it wasn't. I think it could make it all seem more natural and fluent without it. Then again it's all a question of style.
And I'm so reading this again tomorrow morning. *heart*

Woo! Go Eyes. :D:D xD That was really awesome. It kind of confused me for a while ''case I've only seen the first four episodes of Spiral, lol, but that's pretty awesome. :D:D ol. I really enjoyed reading it 'cause Eyes was there! Woohoo. Lol. Well done. :D:D

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