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| rikkufnl4 2008-06-12 ch 1,  | abusei like it alot plz continue |
| chibi heishi 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseOh, this looks really promising. I had wondered what would happen if Seto didn't have Mokuba to protect. Please continue this story, it's too interested to leave lying in the dust. |
| Candy world 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseplease complete it ... please please please. i love it so much. |
| Crystalline Embers 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseAW MAN! A Cliffe! ARGH! You must update this! I really want to know what happens next! Please update this! You haven't updated it since April of last year and it's January 2008! AH! I'm sorry, but this first chapter has me hooked to this. I'd love it if you updated. Please come back and update soon! ASAP! |
| Steggy Likes Juice Boxes 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseAw! Write more please! |
| Kinjiru 2007-06-29 ch 1, | abuseDo continue. The idea is simply awesome and if not for a few lapses in tenses in one or two places, it was very nicely written. Remember that this story will haunt you if you discontinue it. |
| Yami no Mira 2007-06-21 ch 1, | abuseOh, please update this! I like where it's going. I've always enjoyed the thought of what would have happened if these two would've been separated. Seto would've had no one to focus on but himself. I mean, would he have forgotten about Mokuba or not? Interesting thought. |
| Silver Affection 2007-06-21 ch 1, | abuseReally nice start! Please continue! |
| Mystical Sand 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseIt's nice to see Mokuba with a loving family. I wonder what will happen when he and Seto meet for the first time after all these years. How will Mokuba react to the changes in his brother's personality? I hope you write more soon. |
| Zulshin 2007-05-04 ch 1, | abusegreat story so far please update! |
| Shekiah Rosay 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abuseOh please write more! This is really great. ^^ |
| orphen chica 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuseYeah I want to see more. This seems like its going to be very interesting. I'm just waiting to see if you make Seto more of a jerk or less or keep him as is. He does happen to be my favourite character. |
| crystal ice614 2007-04-25 ch 1, | abuseGreat start. Good description on the characters. Poor Seto, I hope he finds Mokuba soon. |
| ANAYAS-CREATER 2007-04-25 ch 1, | abuseSeems good. Update soon! |
| randomreviewer 2007-04-24 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease write more! I love stories with Seto and Mokuba, they're such a cute pair of brothers. Please update soon! ^.^ |