fantastic!
love it!

I love this story. it is a shame that you didn't write more to it thought.
^.^

aw...that's so sweet!! you shld make it into a story~! it was too totally awesome!! XD

A very, very, VERY nice story! :) I like it. A lot! Nice work! R&R my stories as well when you have the time! :D

OMG!! That's all I know how to say right now. That was amazing. It was stupendous. I loved it. I want more. I want more right now!! lolz. I loved the way you wrote that. I felt like I was there. Tell me it's not completed!! ??

Wow...that was amazing. I look forward to reading more of your work
~Aly