Reviews for Within These Belts

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MisatoCarey24 2008-09-19 ch 23, anon.	abusehi, I just finish reading your story and I would love to see the sketches from your other fanfic´s it would be an honor if you let me see them, and by the way do you have any for within these belts?, well great story hope to read something new from you. c´ya :P P.S. my mail is .mx or in case you want to add me to your msg contact list. ciao ciao
littlemichiru 2008-05-21 ch 16,	abuseThe better of all the chapters!10 times!WoW!poor Seiya-kun.GO FOR THE GIRL HARUKA!
krugern 2008-03-09 ch 1,	abuseGreat story hope to get another Michi/Ruka fic from you soon.
Haruka7 2007-12-22 ch 23,	abuseGreat story you have here. Enjoyed reading a remarkable story of my favourite pairing. Keep it up!
Akira-kun 2007-11-08 ch 7,	abuseLOLOLOL! Shounen-ai thing! Now that was really unexpected and hilarious. I loved the whole "good night handshake" thing, funny. You're awesome; love to see more from you xD
DreamingOfMyGirl 2007-10-01 ch 3,	abusecute but I do have to mention that michiru seems really out of character... more like minako or usagi with the air-headedness and the actually caring about what the rumors are saying... but whatever I shall read on. ~dreamer
DreamingOfMyGirl 2007-10-01 ch 2,	abusegood god, good thing I wasn't drinking anything other wise I would of spluttered so bad and probably would of choked on it. I can't believe michiru didn't notice that Haruka was a girl, I mean seriously even if you're being zapped into gorgeous eyes you'd still feel the boobies... (its so fun saying boobies... gah no I sound like some sort of lecherous man... blah)
Facing Reality 2007-10-01 ch 1,	abusegood story i liked it alot
Mantaray 2007-09-28 ch 23, anon.	abuseThanks a lot for such a nice story. Indeed, you can make me laugh a lot. So this could show how develop of your writing skills are. But again, I felt the story seemed develop well until the point that you make the main characters depressed and struggled (Michiru & haruka) with several obstacles. With sluggish story, suddenly you push the story going through the end. I think it would be much better if you take more time to lead reader to the point to believe in issue you used to end the story, like your previous one: Journey, Red angel or even the project (actually, this one also have abrupt ending, yet still logically to show how success of the "project" was. I am looking forward to reading your new story whenever you get it here :)
Tigon_ookami 2007-09-22 ch 23, anon.	abuseGod do I feel stupied...Didn't you mention before something about Hamilton being Mamoru? I could have sworn or you did a really good twist in the end. God it feels so good to hear from my favorite authors again, what it's been 3 years? I'm still upset with "My Red Angel" by you!! But any way. Ya it's good to hear from you again. It like Haruka and Michiru made a bit of a come back this year, must be because everyone who watched the show in elementury are now college students Sigh. Hopes to reading more from you, if you get the urge to. R/R later humans!
Haruka's Knight 2007-09-22 ch 23,	abuseI'm glad it ended happily for all of them.
SilentKing 2007-09-22 ch 22, anon.	abuseUh, I got beaten over the Q&A post! Well, better late than never. * Why was Haruka commitment phobic? Usually, fear is stricken by a traumatic past. However, it was stated that she never had been involved before Michiru. * Why did Mamoru continue with the formalization of the arranged marriage? Is he already part of the grand scheme? If so, then does that mean Haruka is already aware of it back then? * It sounded as if Mamoru was broken hearted; was he in love with haruka? It was mentioned before that they dated. Also, it was mentioned that Mamoru eloped with his girl friend before returning and resigning to his fate. So, what happened to that girl? Didn't Mamoru look for her? * After Yanno's business collapsed due to President's Kaioh's pull-out, it was presumed that Haruka and Yuuki would divert the business into something related to their network - racing. I thought the Steel Industry was a goner, and replaced with something else. Perhaps, you should create some illustrations in your future fictions. Hey, you got the talent, why not share it and inspire others? If we pressure you, as in bug you everyday, would that compel you to write sooner! Kidding. Kidding. Kidding.
Agent-Ayu 2007-09-22 ch 23,	abuselolz nice "epilogue" well at least we know what happened to the others. XD
LitaDelacour 2007-09-22 ch 23,	abusethanks for the extra chapter. Amara
debora diskey 2007-09-22 ch 23,	abuseThis was very good Wish it could have been a Haruka/Usagi fic though those are my top favorites. Ofcourse I do preffer the H/U fics that name the two women as lover and not anything else. You out to write one.

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