This is what i would have liked to see in the series Daniel chasing after Vala. imo he would have been lucky to date her. i hate heroes who dog the heroines. Love how you made Daniel grovel and be sincere.

that was loverly does this take place after Unending (no freezing time-thingy) and things just unfolded like that?

either way absolutly wonderful!!

Sweet. Yeah, its annoying how tptb tease us. They gave us a glimpse of a possible sam/jack wedding and totally erased the Vala/Daniel scheme. blows

Good job. Would have liked it to be more drawn out, thought the realization that they loved eachother was a bit rushed, but good read :)

cheers!

aw...Loved it!

I thought it was cute. I really liked the part about vala outside listening then telling her face to face. Keep up the Good work.

This is a much nicer way for this to happen. I think it would have taken someone, like Sam, to knock him over the head with the fact that he was in love. Wish they would have written it more like this! Thanks so much for writing.

That was awesome!

I was really dissapointed at the end of the episode too! I hated the fact that the Daniel/Vala relationship never happened, at least in the real world. I hate that about alternate reality episodes. It was just like all of those O'Niell/Carter episodes. You know how they were always together in every reality but the real one...

Anyways, this story was amazing! I loved it! When I finished watching tonights episode I kept wondering how Vala and Daniel could get together in the real world...I wish that what happened in this story had happened in the episode...I hope that they make Daniel and Vala, O'Niell and Carter together in the movies.

That was perfect! Love it.

I dunno, I always figured Danial thinks of Vala as an annoying kid sister.

*smiles* There's just one thing...and it's more of a personal opinion. I think he's too scared because he's afraid she IS just messing with him. And he needs something like yelling at her so she cries to make him realize she's NOT messing with him and she DOES truly love him. But that's just me.
Otherwise, I love this fic. I love any DV Unending fic and this one's written very well. Great job.

Aww man that was sweet! Totally what I had in mind for my Vala/Daniel ending but oh well.

Nicely written, love the whole involvemnt of Big T, but nor Mitchell? C'mon mate we need him! LOL!

Please write more in the same style!

yes i too was upset that there was no dv in the end...glad u sorted it all out

Great job!

That was great, having actually SEEN Unending...it makes it all the better...really well written.

e! I love it!!