great characters. :) evil Kabuto.. :3

Wow, the characters are pretty in canon.
I wonder if you could add anything on, since I'd read it.

Yay, you made them all IC. That's good, 'cause not many authors can write an IC Kabuto. They usually make him care about Orochimaru too much or give him, y'know, a heart.

This is really good, though. Thanks for writing it. =)

i liked it i really liked...i think u should turn this into a story..u kept us hanging a bit ..i mean does Hinata know she is pregant.. will she accept it or i mean i dont know what?..but on the real side this is a really good fic i thought them 2 be in character.. and 2 confirm im telling the truth if i didnt like it i wouldnt have wrote anything...cuz i rarely do. So yea make it a multi cap. i think it would work out really...So anyway...BYE!

aw if only he liked her for real lol nice story though

OMG! This is such a good little shot! I loved it, how Kabuto is so in character. I mean, he's perfect, and Hinata...well...not much on her behalf, but enough to let me know she's in character as well. This would be wonderful if it was put into a format where they themselves actually spoke. great job. Bring more KabutoxHinata on this site.

Wow. You must really think Hinata's an idiot.

You do realize that there's very little chance that she doesn't know who Kabuto is and that anything he says can't be trusted? He's only one of Konoha's biggest enemies and I'm sure all active ninja know that; do you really think that Hinata is so dumb that she'd automatically believe anything someone like him would say?

And Hinata's hardly been "deprived of love"; maybe from her family, but Shino, Kiba and Kurenai all love her and she knows that and loves them back. She's not weak and she's not stupid.

You did a good job on your story!