please finish it!

ohh...you cant leave it like that please update!

hey i like ur story! is it like a cliffhanger or are u gonna finish it? i really want to no what happens cause i no it will be intersting. good job

add another chapter!

I loved the story you are doing a great job with it. I have just discovered this site. What wonderful writing you do!

Rachel

scary!please write more your story is wicked honest!i read one similar the other day but it wasnt as good as this!

Erm, good stroy and all, well written, but what started as a lot of detail has slowly dwindled. Also I found the third chapter very confusing, from what I understood Abby had just had her wrists, arms, legs and stomach slit open "to the bone" putting aside that fact that the liklyhood of someone surviving that would be very unlikly (It's fan fic, we're allowed to bend the truth a little) I didn't understand how she was suddenly up and about, running round the hospital to get Kerry. As I said, it's a good story, you've got the suspense going great, but I think that some bits need a bit of work on, maybe you need to add an extra chapter, detailing some of Abby's recovery, just to make things clearer. Hopefully you'll take this as construtive criticism, and not a flame, becuase from what I've read you're a good writer and obviously have a great imagination. Keep writing more, I know I want to see the conculsion of this story!

Please continue! It was so cool! At first in the end I thought you were going to make Mark the killer but then I realized that didn't make any sense. Please continue. I think you did a great job with the whole Carter trying to find Bobby and Lucy. Is he going to save Abby from her stalker? Please write more!

Hey! I'm that guy that from school that was interested in your stories. I read this one, and I must say that you're a terrific writer! Keep up the good work! ;)

this story is great! every line is aweseome!

very good and very suspenseful!

This story is sooooooooooo good! Keep writing!

This is really creapy! Is there gonna be more?

oooooooooooh! very nice, like it a lot! keep writing!

OMG! This story is killing me! You must continue it...SOON!