I pray the muses bring you both inspiration and the time and will to write. Because I wanted to read more chapters of your fic...please..?

Renny... Update or face wrath, ya bum. (I love you, really) But I didn't even know these chapters were here, so. I still have no idea what happened, but if they could just meet again, maybe... Please update? Have motivation.
~Naolin

gah..i want update...
who got raped? (fingers crossed, notshizurunotshizurunotshizurunotshizutunotshizurunotshizuru) oba-chan? abuse? hospital? gawd, this is stressing me out. i need some fluffy shiznat interraction. NOW.
sry, im just way too absorbed in this fic so pls update! i wna no so plsplsplsplsplsplsplsplspls update, neh?
p.s. i wasnt flaming if it felt like it : ) i honestly adore this fic!!

Ah, sorry for the late review. I haven't been too motivated to read Mai-HiME fanfics lately... *shrughs* Fate Testarossa comes into my life and I slightly forget about teh ShizNat (Tho, Shiz/Fate would make a good pairing XD...).

Ehem, anyway. Don't worry, I won't kill ya. *pats head* I actually liked the chapter. Dk, it prolly has something to do w/ it being sorta realistic (I love reading about how messed up the world is *shrugh*). I'm left wanting to read more about it... so, update soon.

OMG!! Where's Natsuki! She needs to come and kick some orderly ass!!

My poor Shizuru! I know it's her ... she can't remember Natsuki, so it must be her in the hospital. They are keeping her drugged up. ::CRIES::

argh!! you evil evil cliffhanger person!!
Oh wow, this was powerful. questions are running wild in my head, I cant wait to get my answers... for your information that was a hint. (next hint comes in the shape of a bat)
I usually skip right past anything that looks to be in poetry format, but this has my attention like no other. Thank you for it!

I'm shocked and confused and I need an update

I hope you post the next parts soon!

There's only one thing I'm wondering about. Did this take place before or after the anime? It could make sense either way I suppose. Anyway, I'll just wait for the next one... :D

omg...this is really awesome...so...she is molested...omg...T.T...but that's ok...it's only fiction...i love u renny-sama

*GASPED*

You are the most EVIL fanfic writer I have came across ...
then again... i just started reading fanfic 2 months ago ...

*GASPED* *SPEECHLESS* *STUNNED*

k... i need to find something to fluff me up now...
*quickly searches the old archives for fluff*

fight!fight!fight-o!...one way of encouraging for me :D
anyways, you are cheating you know? offering piece by piece of the part, it kill. *sighs*

it seems that without shizuru, natsuki is left alone and she is right, shizuru is differnt from the other hime at reach.
i know a pain of longing will pinched when shizuru meet natsuki. Sure enough, the old girl still reme'ber her voice, right? She does in her dream.

too late, i'm so going to hurt you. slowly, but really really painfully. please tell me it's not shizuru, and tell me it's not what i think you are trying to pull.

me angry!

Stop, please stop! If the angst continues so, I will be forced to...leave recorded horror film kill sequences on your phone when you're sleeping! Ha!

Anyway, I've already seen it, but it continues to get to me, so in a sense, good job. As emo as it maybe, it's interesting. You're supposed to do it all at once you know. -_-; I think this is cheating and you need a LONG chapter, but it's okay. You'd better finish the next one soon and I'll update with you. Get to it!

It's really sad, Shizuru isn't there, and the other HiMEs are out of touch. I hope they meet soon. It would still be sad since Shizuru can't remember her but at least they'll be together...

thank u...just made my day...ureshii...