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| HannahSakura.Pinoy 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseIt's wonderful! ^-^ |
| kerricarri 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseWell written and true to the characters. Reishin characterization is great and it was the little thoughts here and there that he contributed that firmly made this fic a great Reishin-centric piece. Very subtly done, too. Not quite sure who Hao is (or whether he's canon), but I still like his part in the plot. Kouyuu's reactions, behavior, subtleties in his expression, etc. throughout the fic was great and made me nostalgic for episode 15. |
| SakuraDreams 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseMuch love to this story. |
| volpa 2007-12-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm usually a nitpicker, but the characterization, interaction, and setup for this story were pitch-perfect. Plus, I feel all fuzzy inside to read mama-bear Reishin defending the cub while trying to keep him from noticing anything. So stilted, adorable, and utterly perfect development. |
| Venedy 2007-10-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery in character! yeah...reishin is very attentive to his son...although slow to show it... :P hehe.. i enjoyed this one! i just love the father n son relationship! |
| Alice elis 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abusei love your story so much .i wish you continew the story. |
| marajade963 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abuseYou've got these characters down pat so well I can hear their voices from the show. I'd love to see you write more of them! |
| musagirl15 2007-07-21 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story.^_^ |
| Animegoil 2007-05-04 ch 1, | abuse-SO- cute. I love them so much, it's just... ah, so endearing when Reishin goes through all this trouble and then tries to HIDE it. I loved that line "Kouyuu and I don't -talk-." So very true. Where did you come UP with this, though? The whole idea in general? O.O it was really good, and really interesting, and made for a great plot line to play with. Absolutely adored with, with the subtle differences in behavior and the characterization, and just the GAH, Reishin-Kouyuu ness! |
| Atrilial 2007-05-03 ch 1, | abuseAH! I love these two! Such a great family. So much fun. Poor abused Kouyuu...Great story! Ciao. |
| Dracoqueen22 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuseI simply adore how you write both Reishin and Kouyuu. Perfectly in character and very amusing. The addition of Kijin was a nice bonus, especially since he and Kouyuu happen to be my favorites. I love the way you write Reishin's thoughts concerning Shuuei. "That Ran boy surely had something to do with this." Great line. |
| Riana1 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuseI love you so much it hurts. This was beyond brillant. |
| dragonmage27 2007-04-25 ch 1, | abuseI wonder what happened between Hao and Kouyuu...tell? xD faved this too. Can you write more? I need it to feed my addiction. |