 Realilly 2007-05-09 . chapter 1I like this. This is Angeline, right? I love the whole shadow thing.
I think it needs a better title though. It kinda blends too much into the story - if you made it a short but metaphorical (lol, I think I just made up a new word...) title it could add more depth.
Other than that, though, good job!
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