I could imagine they're dancing... literally. XDDD
So suspense

I actually like this poem...

Haunting... the only word that can give this justice. Now, generally I'm not a big poetry fan(what is this... Ryhme you speak of? o.O) but this is one that doesn't make me want to rip it to pieces, rearrange it, and see if it makes sense THIS way.(and, trust me, that's a compliment in my book.) no offense if you really like poetry or something(how would I know? To me you're some random internet person!), but, in general, I find it pointless. This wasn't so bad, so I guess you're a bit of a poet! Did you know it?(I couldn't resist)

Being a poet myself... This. Is. Amazing. I particularly like the rhythm you ended up with, very nice. _

(Even though poor ignorant me has no idea what "pas de deux" means...)

-Namine

Beautiful, absolutely lovely. I can almost hear a melody in the background.

*grin* yes Princess Tutu does seem to have that affect doesn't it? My sister introduced it to me and I felt like dancing for a while there.

Anyway, excellent job.

'lioness :)

Wow! I like that a lot! What a great story. Really cool. Good job!

Brilliant! It's got rhythm, it's got double meanings and it was good enough to keep me reading. It's not often I read fan poetry.

Great. Loved it.

A very captivating poem! I love it loads!

...Princess Tutu marathon.

I don't think I knew that, and I make no apologies. XD

But this is still *purr* -

Quite excellent. I may be a poet myself, but you are above and beyond what I can accomplish.

*huggles poem*

You know, I'm highly tempted to try making a desktop background with this... may I put that on my to-do list? I'll send you a copy. _

OOH...

I like! You're really good at differnet styles, and using them to express how the Chars feel...

I love the way you ended it, because they are quite alike, but one seemingly turns a blind eye, and the other either hasn't gotten that far into the mind, or is in a state of unconcious denial. And the symbolic imagery... beuatiful.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!