That was really really really good! :)
Everyone was so in-character and it's so true *sniff* only Yuuki can make Zero smile...

awh
How cute! I loved it with all my heart (L)
silly yuuki, how could she be so blind? x)
great story :D

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that was a totaly cute story and i loved it! you are good at writing!|)

cute! love the bite scene. its hard to find stories about these 2 with a bite scene in it and not hav it like 2 sec. long. good job!

Such a sweet and lovable story. I like your writing style a lot. Well-written ZeroYuuki fluff is a very good reason for all of us to smile :]

so its not just me! when he was teaching her math i couldn't decide wether or not he was smiling and i stared at it for 2 hrs i m glad to fid im not the only one

aW!
THAT was amazing!
i loved it!

that was soo cute i loved it.

Indeed a job well done. You should be proud of yourself! One of my top faves! You truly have a talent. The flow of your writing is so unique. Keep up the great work. I hope you write more Vampire Knight Fanfics.

this story is beautiful and i loved it. Zero and Yuuki are both characterized perfectly and the situation/scene was imaginable enough to be realistic to the VK universe. a mature take and the fact that it does not expand the relationship is belied by the fact that it doesn't NEED to.

Ja Ne! :D :)

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Well done! One of my favourite ZxY stories, well written and practically no effort at all to imagine... more of the same please!

That was really good! I loved it! And OMG! A pretty long ONE-SHOT! NO WAY! Lol. Wonderful. *^_^*

omgawddzz...that was beautiful >/< You kept them in chaacter so WELL! I could SERIOUSLY imagine this happening in the manga!! x3

I love the way you write your fics! Keep up the great work ne! ^__^

Aw! Now all he needs to do is smile so SHE can actually SEE it X3

Wow. That was very well-written. I love your writing style. You wrote beautiful detail that gave the reader a clear image of the scene, and you also captured the emotions beautifully.

By the way, I have to thank you for writing with correct grammer, punctuation and spelling. That really made me happy. =]

I would love to see more of your work.