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| bethsmom 2007-05-08 ch 12,  | abuseI loved this story. Very different, which is good, by the way. Can't wait to see where you go with this!! |
| The Little Corinthian 2007-05-07 ch 12, | abuseOh, this has been a great fic! Personally, I'd like either a prequel or a sequel. A sequel a little more, but either one would be fantastic. I'd also love to hear more about the other kids, maybe the Flack's or Hawkes' and of course the rest of the Messers. I love this universe! :0P Very nice job, looking forward to more!! |
| oodes 2007-05-07 ch 12, anon. | abuseover so soon! great story, thanks. i vote for the PREQUEL next! really need to know what happened 20 years ago... |
| printandpolish 2007-05-07 ch 12, | abuseThis came out so well -- it was fun reading along again. As far as the beta-ing goes, you are very welcome, and I'd be glad to help with any future fics. I think you need one about Scagnetti. :-P |
| Leanne 2007-05-07 ch 12, anon. | abuseThis was an amazing story! I would love to read both the prequel and the sequel when they're written. You are truly talented. |
| :D 2007-05-07 ch 12, anon. | abuseencore, encore |
| Bichonmom 2007-05-07 ch 12, | abuseprefer to see the second one first b/c not real interested in reading about Stella's death. Don't read character death stories and that's what I'm assuming the prequel would be. |
| chili-peppers 2007-05-07 ch 12, | abuseWow! Awesome ending! What a story, i've loved it. So sad to see it end. I defo want to read a sequel! :P Awesome job. |
| Marue61 2007-05-07 ch 12, | abuseReally good story - and I'm picky. I'm guessing that the prequel is about Stella so I think I'll vote for the sequel (with a little more D/L please). |
| notesofwimsey 2007-05-07 ch 12, | abuseLovley wrap up to the story, although I hate to see it end at all (And wasn't that TWO posts in one day? Don't raise the bar so high on the rest of us poor struggling writers, okay? :-) I like Ell coming to terms with all the people in her life, including the new one, and it makes sense that she could only face him once the family issues were dealt with (or started at least). I'm voting for "We Can Work It Out" (gotta love a Beatles shout out!) |
| bando2 2007-05-07 ch 12, | abuseAhh the end. I vote for a sequel I want JD/Ella developing some sort of relationship and the prequel seems too sad. |
| MeredithandDerekfanforever 2007-05-07 ch 12, | abuseI loved it. I would love to read the Prequel to this story as I am wondering how Stella died. I can't wait to read both though. Brandy |
| ladybug1115 2007-05-07 ch 12, | abuseI think you had a great idea with this story. I'm not sure which story I would like to see best but I would like JD and Ell to get closer and maybe see Danny and Lindsay and the rest of the team more. |
| abbeguytje 2007-05-07 ch 12, | abusehey great story nut the prequel are they than just kids or in that direction and if it is I would like that one better and if you wanna but it so far back that they don't excist than I would like the sequel first. So can you let me know wich one you are gonna write. thx |
| bando2 2007-05-07 ch 11, | abuseAww sweet and i like your view on mac. Are we going to see more JD? |