E! I read this story so long ago and now that I have an account I can comment on it! I didn't think the idea of L coming back to life could ever be pulled off, but your story has proved me wrong. Amazing!

:D

Those last few chapters... I think they were the best thing I've ever read.

Aww... Poor L... D:

D: L! DAMN YOU LIGHT! -snarl-

GAH! These rules... so ANNOYING! -snarl again-

Hehe. L is unkillable!

Actually, though I think the lifespan shows the lifespan at that moment, i.e. when they would die of old age. If they get shot, their lifespan shortens to when they would die of blood loss/internal damage, etc. I don't think people are "fated" to die at a specific time, aside from old age.

My gosh this chapter made me laugh AND cry really. I love this story so much, its wonderfully creative and emotionally mature. FOUR THUMBS UP! And Merry Christmas :)

Woo... took me long enough... I read this and the sequal on my phone while I ran my errands and waited for doctors appointments and such. I forgot to review... or maybe I'm lazy... but sh... that's a secret.

I loved this story as much as I loved the series. It was phenomenal. My favorite part had to be when Light was crying for Elijah in the hospital. I myself had a few tears... and I rarely cry when it comes to reading... or even movies... the only movie I ever cried for was Million Dollar Baby. So again, you're an amazing writer. The whole idea of L having a second chance is amazing. There are so many people who have the same idea... but can't work it out properly... like the idea of rules. If the Death Note had them, certainly Heaven would. And seriously... only L would be unhappy in Heaven...

Awesome story!

omg, wow! This story is one of the best I've ever read in the Death Note category. It is so emotional, almost bringing me to tears occasionally. I loved every single chapter and enjoyed it! Now I am off to reading the sequel for it. Just want you to know you are amazing!

NWG

Hey, this was really cool. I actually don't know the anime well enough to say if this is really IC for Light and L (I haven't even seen them meet in the anime), but I enjoy the interaction between the two characters. I can't wait for you to finish the sequal. How many chapters do you think it will be?

Wow. Great job. I don't read much Death Note fic, so this is the first time I've read an "L comes back" fic (I'll check out Strawberry Heartbreak eventually, too, I think). I know you've already started the sequel, but I'm belatedly/prematurely putting in my vote that Light and Elijah stay single. I see the close friendship they've developed here as a kind of romantic love, though I know you weren't really writing it that way.

(Oh, and I don't know if this is the way to contact you about it, but I've been meaning to buy your books ever since I read "Dance With Me." I'm out of the country at the moment, though, and I have no idea how much extra it would cost to ship them to Italy. Anyway, let me know about purchasing/payment options. :D)

This was a good story. I highly anticipate reading the sequel. The characters were ic the whole time, and L/Elijah was positively adorable.

very cool

really

wow

wow, that was an AMAZING fanfic, I have doubts about most fanfics but this was amazing, I read this in a couple of hours...I was so caught up in the story I actually cried when L left the world for a while, well done! This is the FIRST story to go onto my favourites, I can't wait to read the sequel, which will be a few seconds...keep up the amazing work!

Yay! This is a great story; I really enjoyed deciphering the rules several chapters before the end and hoping that L/Elijah would be able to keep them. I'm starting on the sequel now. Good job!

Okay, looking back, L was so out of charachter I forgot he was Ryuzaki, and NOT Elijah. I mean, he displays no intellegence, he seems too happy to me on normal terms, and he even seems a little dense to me. I also forgot that Light was ever Kira. In fact, it seems like Kira is already dead right now. Light is too prideful to give up Kira and how could he be like a normal teen while he's killing people? I have serious issues with this fanfiction. It doesn't really tie in with the original Death Note.

It's pretty good, except I think Light should be more Kira and be cruel to L. Dude! That's his enemy he killed last year! And there they are, getting all chummy with each other. God, how Ryuk would laugh! EVERYONE'S out of charachter, with the exception of Misa and Ryuk