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acceptancewriter
2008-06-13 . chapter 1
hey there. it's a nice story. ever wondering to continue it? ^^
u want to be a writer in future? ME TOO . hhahah. good luck (:
darkakane
2007-10-29 . chapter 1
I loved it. This was simply magical!
dea oriantin
2007-09-19 . chapter 1
I laughed so hard during the phone scene! XD
I'm waiting for next chapters, it will surely be worth reading. :}
Norwegian Moonflower
2007-09-03 . chapter 1
aw! so cute!
I'm going to bomb you with reviews:) so watch out!
Norwegian MoonShadow
2007-07-03 . chapter 1
Aw! I wish I could have seen them!
Now, I've read every single fic you've got up here! I missed your plea for reviews at the end of this chapter, where did it go? I liked reading those^^
ChloeKitty22
2007-06-16 . chapter 1
i just reading sparkles and magnificance or whatever it was called, and now im reading this and i love it.

awesome job! cant wait for more updates =)

actually, i love almost all your stories!

much love
brighid's flame
2007-05-09 . chapter 1
UPDATE SOON! :D
Yellowwolf
2007-04-30 . chapter 1
Hahaha! Definitely loved it! That phone conversation thing was really good! Update soon!
Oh: sequel *cheers*
qwertyuiop
2007-04-30 . chapter 1
v. nice. soo much better then its predecessor. keep up the good work
HannahWeeks
2007-04-29 . chapter 1
yay sequelness loving it

Hannah

x
War Princess Sushi
2007-04-28 . chapter 1
So right now I'm sick as a dog. Feelin' kinda down. Haven't eaten solids in a few days. Don't know why I'm telling you this really. So I was so very gloomy. Decided to check to see if my artsie-Canadian had written anything. I look and- Yes...! Imagine a very sick person trying to look thrilled- that was me. So I read it, expecting something... normal. But I got You. OMG. Thank you. I love you. You made my very sick week, as opposed to simply making my day...

I am a Romantic. I would say I'm secretly a Romantic, but it's not a secret. Just no one asks... Can you imagine that conversation?
"How are you?"
"I'm fine. How have you been?"
"I'm a Romantic."
"..."
mmhhm, yea. Anyway! I carried that Romanticism over to art at age seven, poetry by age eleven and vampires, pre-natural and everything sci-fi by age thirteen. What was my point..? Oh, yea! I love the outfits! Your Draco has totally done the day of my dreams... minus the picknic, wait spelling, picnic. Anyway!

If you can't tell I'm a little more, no change that...
If you noticed I'm more spazzy than normal you should be in my head! I'm so editing my writing so that it makes some sense. Medicine, 'ya know. Anyway!

Wow I need to stop saying that.
The first scene I re-read twice it was so cute but the second one the cake... is that the phrase?
Anywa- Continuing On!

Oh ya' know how you sometimes really want to talk to characters? Well...
"How is it fun to dress up like some pouffe and sit outside eating insect-ed sandwiches?"
I've got so many responses that in my present state of mental confusion I can't choose which five to write. See we just had a back-track, A- Moving Forward!

Right, the second scene was... Wicked? Wonderful? Thrilling? Jealousy inspiring?
But what I loved the most was the basic poem in the last two paragraphs. It would be So easy to make that a poem. So Easy. My hands ache with it!
I was planning to give you my favorite line- but I can't. So Any-... Oh, who cares?... So Anyway!

I was planning on responding to your last message, but I got sick. Still the message can be used for this mail- I await your next chapter with baited breath.
If I were feeling better I'd take five minutes and write you a poem... but I'm not.

Anyway!
Best of luck, I'll send my muse over to meet yours and conspire-
Sushi
nameofanangel
2007-04-28 . chapter 1
Great, prolouge like thing (?). Please update soon!
TheBoltShapedScar
2007-04-28 . chapter 1
Cute! A little distanced though
fifespice
2007-04-26 . chapter 1
interesting start
AngelikRebel
2007-04-26 . chapter 1
This is amazing. I can't wait for more!
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