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dream kid
2009-09-21 . chapter 6
pleaz update soon
smexyforever
2009-08-23 . chapter 6
love this!
more of harem with guys!
write , please, more!
AkatsukiGurl21
2009-08-02 . chapter 6
Wow...that's all I have to say. I really like this story! I hope you update soon.
PirateCaptainBo
2009-07-27 . chapter 5
Bo: Ohohoho!~ Mysterious girl! :D Bo must say, she usually is a total hater of Sakura but for some odd reason Bo's starting to like her in this chapter. Always happy that Yugito has a friend! :D Mysterious man and the purring creature! Bo is super duper curious about them... And using tarot cards!! Awesomeness. Update again soon!

Ski: Oh um not sure if you want to change this or not but, "She would take this not only as a grown woman, but as a Shinobi of Konoha" you might want to change Shinobi to Kunoichi since thats what they call female ninjas... But that's up to you! ^^ The interaction between Genma, Hayate and Iruka was hilarious! XDD Lovely chapter! FANTASTIC STORY! UPDATE AGAIN WHEN YOU HAVE TIME! :D
manticore-gurl071134
2009-07-12 . chapter 6
interesting fic! Please continue.
Sabishii Kage Tenshi
2009-07-04 . chapter 6
There is 1 thing that confused me about this chapter.

The purple-blue haired man frowned as he gazed emotionlessly into Squall’s eyes, before smirking in an arrogant fashion.” So you forgot.” It wasn’t a question, but a statement from Squall’s perspective. Giving Squall, a rather deadpanned look, “We’re where the ones helping you claim your mate.”

The last sentence.. What the hell does it mean!? I've been pondering on it ever since I read it and couldn't concentrate on the chapter. :| Is it supposed to mean "We were" Or what?

- A confused Sabishii K. T.
god of all
2009-06-28 . chapter 6
Great chapter and story so fair pleaces continue the story soon.
Inumaru12
2009-06-01 . chapter 6
*Flails in happiness from update* Yay! Update!! First off, i re-read the entire thing and i just now noticed that Harry has Ace in his mates as well. That's hawt. XD I can just see a SanjiXHarryXAce sandwich now, and it's awesome. XD lol.

anyway, i'm loving the new update and the epic longness. Yay for Riona!Bashing! ^w^ I'm still a little confused by Harry randomly appearing at Hermiones house(?) i dunno, maybe i missed something (which is more then likely) I noticed a bit of spelling and grammer mistakes but this is the unbeta-ed on so it's understandable. (Makes me wanna take a pen to it and start correcting it though, lol) you forgot to add the (2) at the bottom, just a heads up.

Anyway, this is looking great and i'm gunna patiently wait for more. Congrats at making it through your first year at university and hopefully you'll have more time to write but it's understandable if you don't so don't fret too much. Till next time!
tedlay
2009-05-31 . chapter 6
please write as soon as you feel up to it
tedlay
2009-05-31 . chapter 3
please write asap
Michael01
2009-04-03 . chapter 5
Good story, what's about the next chapter?
Sabishii Kage Tenshi
2009-01-14 . chapter 5
I'm confused. =) But I will check out the poll. Please update soon!
11OneDone2Many
2009-01-01 . chapter 5
pls update soon! i like hayate-sensei!!

kakashi and sasuke can go suck each others balls for all i care! when kakashi realise that naruto is his sensei's son, go to hell!

harry is so cute with squall!! >_
goldchild
2008-12-24 . chapter 5
i think you should not be righting a new story and keep righting this story it is good and has some of my favorite naruto pairings
i also hate sasu/naru so its all good for me
autumn-annette-19
2008-11-30 . chapter 5
Whats next, whats next.
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