 Ardelis Mercy 2007-04-30 . chapter 1A romantic and tragetic story. Simple and beautiful. I liked how we got to see her move through the rest of her life, questioning things and holding fast to her love. It was almost like a journey and that's what I really like about this poem. It wasn't just words put down, it was a moving and flowing story that had something to say. Brillant. :D I loved it. Keep writing!! |