"he had been breaking exhileration in like a pair of shoes"-Brilliant! A sad and healing story, quite plausible.

Another great piece!

IGC t DM

Fantastic as always! Beautiful!

I am finally able to read this now that I have seen the finale and I am continually amazed with the way you manipulate and form these strings of words that seemingly capture ... everything. I loved the last paragraphs especially the line about "estrangement before the last piece of rice hit the ground." Very nicely done and the characterization was spot on.

You really have trained us readers to expect nothing less.

OMG, that's how I want to show to end. 'cause it is kind of important that you don't get involved with someone when you both have a dangerous job

ALSO, I love how quickly Sara decided for them to resign

perfect!

A very beautiful story (and gratefully not a CD one - as I hope for the beginning of Season 8). Thank you so much for writing this story.

I loved it! I'm stressing out about whether Jorja is leaving the show and I hate that I don't know. I live in NZ so the lovely people in the good old USA have to keep me informed on what's going on...Do you think that she really will leave?

And I repeat...I LOVED IT

Trina

what a great story! loved it ;)

abeautiful sad little story. I wonder if a person ever truly recovers from a tramatic event like that. I'm so glad that they have each other. anne

What a great piece... this is exactly what I'm hoping for on CSI. A beautiful happy ending, but very real at the same time.

Fantastic fic, thank you for sharing.

Ooh and for a title ;) how about - A posse ad esse (From possibility to actuality)

I could only say that if this is how it would all end on the show, I would die a happy person. Now I could only pray that the writers on the show would be half as brilliant as you are.

You see, this is exactly how I hope things end. If Jorja doesn't come back next season, fine. Have her stay at home or move on to a less dramatic job. We know Billy is coming back but perhaps on a limited basis so why can't our geeks simply run off into the sunset together? Let us hope you are predicting the future! Great story as always... I love your stories! Hands down they are my favorite GSR stories!

OMG ! You're awesome ! You write so well. It's wonderful!

Your story just hit me right in the heart too. I'm totally speechless now.

Oh, wow! Excellent story, and I love your insights into how their relationship would change them. This would be a great way to end the show, actually...

Oh my God. *sobs*

Wow, I can't even see my screen now, can't even think clearly.

It was so gorgeous. Everything you said in this story just hit me right in the heart, painfully and yet...wonderfully. I don't want Sara to die; I KNOW she's just a TV Show character, so is Griss, and yet, I truly love them both. So when I read your descriptions, at the beginning when you scared the hell out of me, or during the whole story, when Sara is alive, but Grissom is still scared to death...just WOW. I was seeing the scenes as if I was really watching them, you’re so true with the characters, it is so believable, so vivid...Well, I'm totally rambling here, I'm not sure I'm even making any sense here (it’s all your fault, I’m in a puddle of tears lol). I would just say this: please, never stop to write. You are gifted.

Thank you, really.

*Elialys*

PS: Okay, I understand why you didn’t find a title, it’s hard to name the awesomeness. I read some great suggestions in your reviews, though. I would love to suggest something, but you melted my mind, it wouldn’t worth your beautiful work :) Thanks again.