 David Ishida 1/21/02 . chapter 1 Wow, that was so good, kepp writing! |
 Dragon RainMaker 12/28/01 . chapter 1That really is a challage, if there is a contest, I bet you are no.1 |
 Digidynasty 7/15/00 . chapter 1 It's really good. The flow was perfect, the wording was excellant and the rhyming was terrific! Great job! |
 Quilt 6/28/00 . chapter 1 Wow! This is really deep! Really! This is the side of him that most would not see. |
 Jade 6/20/00 . chapter 1 Kewl! Kewl! Kewl! Very, very nice poem! Esspessally for doing the whole name thing! I loved it! |
 Li Kayun 6/20/00 . chapter 1! that was ! |