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| nikki.02 2007-12-31 ch 1,  | abuseI loved how you wrote this fic from a different and totally anonymous person's POV. It only makes it that much more interesting. Love the DL parts too of course! |
| JennCorinthos 2007-05-24 ch 1, | abuseCute short... Loved it... JENNIFER |
| PRTFCSI 2007-04-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh wow. Interesting perspective. Great story! |
| CarolinaH.Manning 2007-04-27 ch 1, | abusesweet. the comments of the photographer and their interaction too |
| ReJo 2007-04-26 ch 1, | abuseI read The Cabbie and I enjoy reading about DL from an alternate POV. Good job! |
| wolfmyjic 2007-04-26 ch 1, | abuseNice. I really liked this. And I'm glad the photographer got his picture than left. ~W~ |
| Salean 2007-04-26 ch 1, | abuseThey are just so adorable! Aw, so sweet. Really well written as well. |
| ImaSupernaturalCSI 2007-04-26 ch 1, | abuseSO cute. This shoulda been the ending! I can see the headlines in Bozeman the next day...and the look on Danny and Lindsay's faces when they got the paper that morning! |
| Yemam2422 2007-04-26 ch 1, | abuseI am so glad you posted this - it was excellent. "and this is where Lindsay Monroe is leading (well, dragging really) the New Yorker. Strangely, he keeps saying ‘Montana’, as though it will get her attention" - that was really cute. It's so commonplace for us to hear Danny call Lindsay that nickname that it's funny to see an outsider's reaction to it. Of all the moments on the show I wish we could have seen more of it is the post-court house Danny/Lindsay interaction. But this is a great alternative - as is your other story Oro y Plata Excelsius (which I also love). Great, great job. I look forward to everything you write. |
| gator-md 2007-04-26 ch 1, | abuseAlso enjoyed this. Nice descriptions. Simple, but well-written. |
| Kaoli water goddess 2007-04-26 ch 1, | abuse-Squeal- I love it!! Wish it really had happened... or it could have; we will never know... |
| mabelreid 2007-04-26 ch 1, | abuseI love seening the world of DL through someone elses eyes. Theis was very well written nice job |