I know I'm horribly late but I'm hoping this will give you some new feedback!

Great,great story. Loved how you wrote it from Faith's point of view. Typically I'm a Fuffy shipper, but this story is very good, no matter what you ship.

Well done!

A great story. Very good.

Pretty good so far! I don't believe I've ever read a story of Faith being in the coma. So it's very unique. I would like to see your take on Faith after she wakes up. Great job!