>>Why was she so…so….Un-fawning!?

Homg so cute. ^^ The only thing I like more than a fic in which James makes Lily have some sense and come 'round and finally snog him, is a fic in which James does not succeed in doing so. x]

Anyway, it was very cute and I laughed quite a few times. And I also just realized that there is a slight pun whenever someone says that a girl FAWNS over James...as he is a stag.

I AM SO CLEVAR! XB

Anyway, great story.

cute. i liked it. nice twist to the ending. and the characters are so believeable! i love it!

that was rlly gud! and im forcing u to write more :D :D
hehe continue plz!

Haha. Good ending. Very amusing.

Hey
i think u should really consider continuing this story
its a good oneshot but it would be an amazing STORY!
love,
Ale

This was really funny and cute... i bet your so sick of people calling your stories cute my friend calls mine cute and i want to gouge out her eyes... but alas it was very funny and VERY cute!