|Reviews for The Night of the Setting Sun|
| Neshomeleh 4/4/13 . chapter 1
I just love this story so much, it's so sad and sweet, it makes my heart ache
| Anon 11/22/12 . chapter 1
OMG...I wonder if everyone who read this understood it...omg how sad...wow...
| LuckyLadybug 2/6/12 . chapter 1
Oh wow. I wasn't expecting that twist ending! How heartbreaking! I can just imagine the look on Jim's face. And poor Arte. I wonder if he realized his true state or not.
I really like how you lead readers to believe that Jim is simply ignoring Arte until the final reveal that maybe he really doesn't, probably really doesn't, hear him at all.
| Cruelest Sea 4/10/11 . chapter 1
This is amazing! Very well written and I wasn't expecting the twist ending.
| Olivia Sutton 9/5/10 . chapter 1
Ooooh, I love it! I had to read the last couple of paragraphs twice to realise that Artie was a ghost - but it gave me the shivers!
I want to know what happened to Artie - tho' it's perfectly in character for Jim that he would be full of guilt if Artie died and Jim couldn't save him.
Again - I loved it!
| Jopot 7/11/08 . chapter 1
Wow! The element of surprise that Gordon is actually already dead was good, really good.;-)
| JimandArtie4ever 4/25/08 . chapter 1
A great story. I read this one a long time ago and forgot about it until now. I liked the part where Artie was telling Jim that he was foolish for doing what he was going to do alone.
| WWWLover 9/5/07 . chapter 1
I think that you did a really good job at writing this.
It took me a little while to figure out what was happening. But at the end, when it said "James West turned back to look at the empty railroad care for the last time", I was very surprised.
I think that the relationship between Jim and Artie in this story was really well written. You did a good job at showing that Jim and Artie are closer than just partners and best friends.
| nittanyapple 6/16/07 . chapter 1
i must admit that i didn't get it at first. But then i figured it out, and wow! you have a voice here, and it broke my heart! Godd job!
| gaffer42 5/11/07 . chapter 1
Oh, well written! I love bits like this, wehre you think you know what's going on and then it blindsides you!
| Kelly 5/7/07 . chapter 1
Maude I don't think it suicide maybe sacifice for good of the country
I like see more chapter in this story see where lead Jim West to sacifice his life to good of the country
| challengerspet 5/4/07 . chapter 1
OMG I so did NOT see that coming. will you be writing more so we know what happened to get them to that point? And if so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE hurry!
| Kelly 4/28/07 . chapter 1
Damn I read other W Stories that both Jim or Artie or both sacifice themselves to save US President Grant or the country
That how they do in Chicago way
| MaudeB 4/27/07 . chapter 1
I never understood the suicide theme that several of these stories had, but this one was such a surprise and the writing so good, I must give it two thumbs up!