Ah, but I do love a good sad ending in the morning. Thanks very much for writing this!

OH. MY. GOD. I never thought that I would see this. I absolutely love the Erlkoenig- and always, ever since the first time I heard it, it has evoked images of Jareth for me. That someone else made the same connection, let alone wrote fanfiction about it, astounds me. I know this is only the first chapter, but I already know that you are a genius. Thank you.

Creepy, I wonder if Jareth's going to appear or not?

Man, you are giving me shivers. Its very eerie, but I like it.

Well, seeing as I don't write "smut" well at all (and have no wish to, actually, but that's beside the point), you're pretty good at it. Or is it good at disturbing/fascinating me? Yeah, let's go with that one.

I actually really like this epilogue. Faint memories, the sad family...My overall verdict on this story is frightening, but well-written. Good work, Subtilior.

Ok. No hope. Damn. Such pain! This is so disturbing, yet still so fascinating. She's dead. I knew it. Great. *facepalm* Damn Goblin Kings...

AGGH! NO! I *knew* he was going to kill her! And now he's done it. Damn it, there has got to be some way this can end at least relatively well...though I highly doubt it, there MUST be.

Whoa. *blinks at end of chapter* Okay, what just happened? I've heard of out-of-body experiences, but this is a new one. I suppose the only way to find out is to read on...

Ok, not killed, but freaked out, near dream-ravished, and seriously hurt in a god-forsaken ravine at night in the freezing cold woods. Good grief, I'm almost afraid to go on...but go on I shall.

Dear god, he's going to kill her! You're merciless, Subtilior, and even as I panic I cannot help but respect an author with such power as you have.

Have I yet explained my adoration for the darkness and poetry of this story? Well, save it for later, because right now Sarah's got to save Toby, and I'm running hell bent for leather right by her side.

*eyes boggle* OH hell no. The car breaks down, the interminable call-waiting, the unmistakable deer/owl/fog shapes...Help!

O.O This gets simultaneously more and more freaky, more and more fascinating. I love that your Jareth commands ice and wind and all such inhospitably cold elements. I love the cloak of night and stars. He's so evil, yet so amazing...

Oh lord, it's happened. Der Erlkönig has made his grand entrance, and Toby's gone yet again...Yikes!

Dang, again with the evil cloth-of-gold dress. Sarah honey, you've got to get out of there *fast.*