OHMYGAWDAWESOME.

A SEQUEL WOULD BE SO COOL.

Its an awsome story! Is their going to be a sequal about the kids using the SERPENTS TAIL and the REVERSING MIRROR on Jack?

I've just read this, so sorry that my review's a bit late:

I love you, but I hate you...so much X.x

This story is sheer awesomeness, and I'm glad that the new Dragons aren't all cliche'd.

Are you going to ever continue it? I admit that there isn't much of a plot suspect beyond getting Jack corporeal again(IF they do that in the first place), but it'd be nice to have some closure. That was a major cliffhanger you left us there, and it'd be a shame if it just went uncontinued.

Though, that said, that was an awesome way to end the story!

Good job, and I hope you continue it!

Now, off to look for more Spicer stories...

Positively creepy. I liked it. Good job.

Absolutly. The. Best. Story. I. Have. Ever. Read! Oh my god! This- This was just too awsome for words! I Love the ending! I also love the begining and the middle! Ah hell, I love the entire freaking story! But ESPECHILY(sp?) the end! XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD !

BACK FROM THE DEAD **!
XD
Jack Spicer shall LIVE AGAIN!
*insert maniacal evil laughter here*

CLAY!
...
At least...
At least he got to sat his piece.
Got to say he was sorry.
Before he-
He-
You know.

WHOA.
Evil boy genius is way more bad ** now that he doesn't have to be afraid of dying.

*big watery eyes*
Jack...
No. NO!
JACK!
*bursts into tears*

Fantastic!
-TDL

very intriguing. creepy. nice!

woah, Jack was all psycho and stuff! Well done, it was awesome. Genuinly creepy. And you killed off the ones I didn't like, whoo!

...

meep. D:

whoa creepy i loved it great job i am glad you didnt kill clay he is my fav
V.B.

holy cow this fic was so amazing!
i couldn't stop reading.

please, please write a sequel!

(btw, 'as if'. the best answer ever, haha.)