I loved this story, Kaida reminds me of my self (with out so many demons). Your story was great, keep writing! :)

I like sappy love stories. . . But at first it seemed like you wanted to make it more like a tragic love story!

Poor Rhea. . . Getting harrassed by her own characters. . .

I laughed. "What happened to my bad-(beep) attitue?!" I don't know. . . It sounded funny. . . And I keep wondering if the Prince really is in love with Kaida.

Kukarkin kinda scares me, but she's cool . . . Still scares me, though. Who the hell has a love obsession for the Dahaka?!

Monigan kinda scares me, but I like her! . . . Not like that.

I like ADOS. . . It reminds me of my friend Squirrel-chan!

*Jaw drops.* I-like-this-story-already! Yay! Another person who loves to make fun of the Prince!

This chapter is so beautiful... i'm crying. oh god! Sh's so dumb for letting the best thing that ever happened to her slip from her hands. Love ur writing style. keep up da good work forever and ever and ever and ever...

Awesome story, I don't think its too sappy and I can't wait to read Dark dreams 2! Actually, I might just go and do that now...

Change your mind about that sequel and I will be forced to hurt you.

Meep! (Is glomped) lol.

This is getting to the point now where I'm looking for updates on this story the minute I have access to a computer! I'm at school right now... can't let teach now what I'm doing... lol.

But I am now SO in love with this story! I am such a romantic... You better get that sequal up very, very, VERY soon!! Or else... lol.

~kiri

This chapter brings a strange feeling to my dead blackened heart. No, seriously, I think I'm having a heart attack! Someone get a healer!
Liranaz: No, you're just happy for Kaida.
Zanaril: Hap- py? What is that, a new kind of coffee?
Liranaz: Maybe not then. Could you be just dreading the turmoil Rhea is undoubtedly going to put the Prince and Kaida through.
Zanaril: Nah, I like dread and turmoil. It gives me a warm fuzzy feeling inside.
Liranaz: Anyway, your scimmitars are ready.
Zanaril: Ohh, pointy...
Liranaz: Ooh, weirdo.

And yes, "Mr. Shiny!" and co. do take cheques. The adress is:

No. 1337
Spiky Avenue
The 56th level
The Abyss

nice, I really like this stuff, keep it up

/can't wait for next story

Nice, though it will be interesting to see how you do the thrid game. So what does Sacorsanct want with Kaida?