I've read this story so many times my eyes have crossed, but I never stop loving it. The quirks of the characters, the way the relationships develop, the plotline, everything is so well done I simply can't stop reading it.

Plus I just love the idea of Naruto beating his own ideals into Sasuke and dragging him back to Konoha.

Yay! So cute! I loved this story it made me want to chuck the computer at the wall when Yori was getting his way. Great job!

OMG. Freaking awesome! I luv it! I hope you make more of this fic. I couldn't rate and review for the chapters cuz I couldn't stop reading.

i just wanted to tell you that this is by far my favourite story. you wrote it really well.
thanks for writing it coz if u didn't i would've been bored out my brain for the last two days coz not many pple write at the same quality as you do and its annoying reading stories where pple dont spell or gramma check.
jen

Hay
I'm finally done. -wipes forehead-

Okay, I have to tell you constructive criticism because I think you deserve sincere words from me.

The beginning was slow, drowsy start, so it took me several attempts to get through the first few chapters. The descriptions were enough but I really would prefer some action over static in the beginning. Just a little. Up until Sasuke tries to get Naruto to reject Hinata, I was just breezing through. Solely plowing on just for the SasuHina scenes.

But THEN you make naruto go out with Hinata, and because that was unexpected to ME as well, it got more interesting. After that, I began to read your fanfic because I wanted to know what happened and because I love your romantic scenes. Plus your makeout scenes are very real and descriptive. O_O

I love, love, love how you make me fall in love with Sasuke. I am already a SasuHina fan, a big Hinata fan and even bigger Sasuke fan, so I really liked the way you wrote it. I like how Sasuke is so deeply in love with Hinata and I like how you make Hinata alright. She's a little overdone with the 'sacred, beautiful, perfect' ness almost to the point where I would make a small grimace, but that's okay. I LIKE THAT she's a nice person, and that people recognize her. But ... go easy on the 'perfect' scene. I really don't like reading mean, selfish main female characters. It comes with having Fruits Basket being one of my very earliest animes and now that tohru personality has really stuck with me. Seriously! It's just I think you deserve my true words. Maybe (because I read your profile) you wanted some constructive criticism to help you out on your road to writershaven? mmhm, well good luck. I see talent (no lie, no false encouragement) in this fiction.

I really enjoyed reading this. :)

btw, I loved the way you described this part:
"As two of her closest friends, Hinata felt they deserved it. The other part of her was what was keeping her from adorning her usual cheerful smile. It was a strange feeling to describe. It wasn’t one of jealousy like she thought it would be; instead, it was more like a jab of loneliness and pure confusion. Like a pet who was taken back to the pound to be replaced by something more beautiful and loving. Hinata felt lost and useless. She felt like she wasn’t good enough, or pretty enough, or smart enough to be chosen. She wasn’t anyone’s first choice…even though she would’ve done anything to be that first choice."

It was very beautiful and made my insides reach out.

BTW this is probably not the only nice thing that striked to me in this fiction. :) I probably saw a lot more.

Good luck! Thanks for writing for us!
<3

LOL unpredictable Naruto-kun!
Poor Sasuke. He seems nice when he unconsciously acknowledges his care for Hinata. <3

YES!YORI FINALLY GOT WHAT HE DESERVES!HA HA!(I feel like jumping into the story again)*Walks up to Yori and looks at all his messed up limbs**lets out a grin as I kick him in the head.I laugh as he screams and watch him suffer like he made hinata go through*...sweet!

*sighs heavily*The storys almost over!I wish i hadnt gone through it so fast!

Grave mistake my butt!If I were Sasuke, Yori would have been dead a long time ago!

You know what,I wanna be completely honest on what was actually going on while i was reading this(I don't do that much)I actually...started crying when she took of the ring!It was so sad! I love your storys but i hate when people make it so sad like this!

If I could just jump into the story,I would be calling the Hyuuga compund right now and saying "Im sorry,but the agrrement between Hinata and Yori cannot be followed through. I"found"Yori's body in the woods dead(More like i was the cause of it)and I'm very*gulp*sorry that Hinata and Yori won't ever have the chance to get married"then i would hang up with my eye twitching and thinking "Yeah,sorry my butt!Hinata can finally have peace without that rapist waiting to make his next move!"

Trust me,if i were in Sasuke's shoes,Yori would have been so torn up it would have looked like a bomb came and only effected him.

Anyway, I like how you ended this chapter,you did a really good job. In my opinion,this is the best chapter so far(even though Hinata almost got raped)

I swear,if I could jump through the screen and that black haired dude(I'm too lazy to look right now)wasn't in the hospital, I would kick the crap out of him for flirting with hinata!

lol...nice job Tsunade!*gives tsunade high five*Oh yeah!By the way,I agree,they really do make a cute couple!

I'm glad that in this chapter you made Sasuke open up to Hinata a lot and soften up. it is a really good sign of true love

(holy crap!I've been reading this thing for more than 2 days and i havent even gotten 1/2 way yet...thats sad TT.TT