Sniff sniff.
I want to cry! WHAQ
!but then the God Damnit, me and my big trap!

HA that made me laugh!

Aw!
that made me sad...but it was good sad...okay, not good sad, but good writing...
oy
xoxoLAURAxoxo

That was soo sad:( Great writing btw.
~Sarah

omg that was good! you got me crying!! :)(:

im gunna cry
no

its a bit better then the first one but the first one was still amazing
its 3:45 and i cant sleep and i was bored outta my mind so i decided to read it :D

Poor Poor scooter, oh how we love you
well i love you lauren!

Lol, I agree with "X" about the first paragraph... And OC siblings always kind of bothered me. Actually, they really bother me, but this story is alright.

And Soda has cried before, silly! :P ("I remembered our parents funeral. I cried in spite of myself, Soda broke down and bawled like a baby...") And he cries after he runs out of the house when Darry and Pony are fighting.

And trying to make Soda come to the park just to watch her commit suicide bothered me, too. I mean, they had to go try and "hide" Dally from the cops... Well, he committed suicide too, but at least he pretended to have a reason for making them come to the lot.

Oh well, I'm picky, but your writing is good.

Peace, love and flower children!
-Krak

Okay. You always review my stories so how could I not return the favor? I'm not a big fan of stories where one of the gang has a sibling that wasn't mentioned in the book, but I actually thought this was all right for being like that. I think it defintitely works best as a one-shot instead of a continuing story. I think you should try a story with the characters from the book! Seriously, I think it would be great if you did that. I promise to read and review if you do...lol. Good job though.

Nice try, but she's still a mary-sue. It's a shame because otherwise the fic is good, but seriously, that first paragraph was cringeworthy.

Aww, Pony, its really sad; but good. I wasn't expecting Scooter to die..
See you Monday
-Johnny

aw poor soda ='[
but itz amazingly goodyumz
nice job