I love it >/< it was great!! but I would like more action (like some kissing or a hot make out or more).

i just love this pairing!! i want them to stay together for ever!!

Quite a well-written story! One of the (very very) few Twelve Kingdoms fics I really like, although thinking of Youko suddenly disguising herself as a hanjyuu was a little odd... Nevertheless, I like this story - and I wish there were more Yoko/Rakushun fics like it! :)

Very nice work.

IGAF-kun

Aw~ 'sigh' that was sweet... RakushuunxYouko 4 eva! ^^

ah its so beautiful! theres not enough youko and rakushuun fanfic out there, and you write their characters beautifully!! i hope you write more!

absolutely lovely - and totally true to their characters. A beautiful fan fiction.

This was absolutely beautiful, and is by far my favorite Twelve Kingdoms fic. I love the Youko/Rakushun pairing and I think yours is the first that takes on the whole hanjyou/human thing in such a detailed and well-considered way. The only thing I'd maybe suggest is throwing in a line or so about *how* Youko was able to disguise herself as a hanjyou .I simply assumed it was through the power of suiguto or something like that, but had a nagging irritation throughout the fic because you never even mentioned it. Other than, simply a wonderful oneshot. Kind of wishing there was more of it, actuall ^_^

This is a sweet anf heart warming little fic. Youko's and Rakushun's interaction was very natural and true to their charactor's. The only thing that I am curiouse about is how Youko got into that hanjyuu form. Great fic.

-ST

Whe! I loved this! Not only was it sweet, it conveyed almost perfectly the kind of deep relationship those two have, as in the original. Good!

This was so beautiful, and so in-character as well. I'm kinda surprised there's so many YoukoKeiki fics, even though there's no romantic dinamic between those two at all. The interaction between Youko and Rakushun, on the other hand, carries so much potencial.

This was great! Keep up the good work, and wirte more on these two.

Thank you for writing this! There is so little good 12K fanfiction out there and even less featuring my two favourite characters *sigh* This definitely made by day =D

I absolutely love it!! youko in a hanjyuu form?? i would love to see that! Excellent writing and very creative. good job and i hope you keep writing more Twelve Kingdoms story!

i love it! fluff machine! can I add it to my c2?

I enjoyed how you built the story up. Yay for Youko/Rakushun!