I actually started crying... Ooh, that was beautiful and so sad... Damn, I'm depressed now. But, it was very well written and I'm glad to have finally found another BoydXMist fic. Not enough in the world!

Wow. Just... wow. Utterly heartbreaking. And wonderful. I can't even write full sentences because I'm so floored.

This is definitely one of the best FE one-shots that I've read. The whole thing was brilliant, with the battle and then the romantic parts and then the totally devastating ending. I wish he could have saved her, but your ending was much more poignant.

I hope to see some more FE stuff from you!

Good, though I'm not much of a Boyd/Mist fan. Hope to see more FE9 stories from you.

Aw...poor Mist.

I love your style of writing. Very nice job of kinda guiding the reader along so they know it was a Venin axe. I only have one minor suggestion; watch the verb tenses at the end. I think it would sound better if Boyd was speaking in past tense ('So you'd know...' instead of 'So you'll know'), but overall, good job!

This is sad, but it's very beautiful. To tell the truth, I think Mist should either end up with Boyd or Rolf. You really made an interesting story here. Keep on writing stuff, I'll try to read it.