I love your plot, and I noticed your improvement in your writing! Very good! It's been 8 years since you last updated, and I will be waiting for that update! I bet you are past high school hmm? That means you're probably very busy! Oh well, it was a good story, and I will be overjoyed if you update at least one more time.

-Syd

good read

Loved it! Can't wait for the new chapter! ITS GONNA BE AWESOME!

The story is great, but you need to learn about paragraphs!

OMG! What a wonderful story!

I can't believe you were 16(?) y.o when you've started writing this story. I'm really impressed :)BIG respect! :D

I just can't wait to read the finall chepter... but don't worry, I can wait even 10 years- this story is worth of it.

You are amazing, wonderful, great and talented writer! You are AWESOME! :D :D :D

I must add this story to my Favourites ;)

I will wait for your update... until you update... I hope it will happen soon, but if not, well... I will still wait :D

(oh, and sorry for my english- it's horrible, I know :p)

I love this story

please finish this story it was amazing!

please finish this I am dying to know what happens PLEASE! :o)

Whats da full summary of this story please?...

i no its a romance but whats it about...?

btw nice but the paragraphs... damn... they need to be cut up a lil

What... happens... next?

Really really good fic, more please :D *looks expectantly like a Saiyan waiting for food*

col story,one of the best.plz update..pretty pretty plz.

Wow! This story is awsome! I love G/CC, but there just aren't alot of them out there. Poor Gohan having to see his mommy like that. I love that Goku is getting into the role of stern/loving husband. YAY! Also don't let mean reviews by others bother you 'cause you're a great writer! Keep up the good work!

'Lo there! I just wanted to pop by and tell you that I just finished reading your story and I'm like.."Wow.." _ I loved it so much and in fact thanks to your story *and a few others I read* I have now registered and I am going to begin putting my fanfic ideas and stories up as soon as I can! XD Anyways, I also understand fully that you're under pressure w/college and life so plz, take your time! I know for a fact, though, that as soon as you've posted the next CH I'll be 1st in line to read it! XD

i was just wondering when the next chapter is going to come out. i hope you are still writing this story. hope to see the next chapter soon! BYE !

The text has promise. If I could /read/ it, so much the better. Absolutely incomprehensible formatting. Check a college gramar text for paragraphs and how to apply them; you're using them as /scene breaks/.