Okay yeah, pretty angsty there in the beginning, but I like angst well enough so I still enjoyed it. Besides, I think that a little angst makes for an even better sweet and fluffy moment. Hannah is cute! I have a little cousin who does the same thing. She'll just walk up to you and go "Boo! I found you!" Anyway, I really liked it because your angst is still really great, but is backed up by that terrific happy ending! (Wanna guess how many synonyms for great I know?)

Thanks for the cake, can I get ice cream with that? *yawns and smiles*

LOVED IT! i loved how it kept me guessing...i tried to figure out when all these things were going through luke's head...at first i thought it was right after lorelai's ultimatum...then i thought it was right after lorelai and chris divorced...anyway, just wanted to show my love...nice job!

aw! that was so sweet!

aw that was so sweet i loved it

Sarah

aww adorable )

That last scene on the porch had me melting! Although i would prefer a boy but another girl would do lol

Hey, for a fluffster, you captured the essence of angst very well. The ending was really, sweet too. Guess what? You pass!